5. Triple_N Vs. 38. Personify
 

Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time

12 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

checkin in, gl NNN, i kno u wont no show to this.

Checkin' in this.....gl....son.....................

(1)triple n wut u gotta realize even in these lives, punchin ya rhymes doesnt mean that u can "master punchlines"
(2)theres "no name needed" to describe wut this "queen" has done, calls people herb but he "bitches" in the wrong forum
(3)the king has come back just to be decrowned, a "cold welcome" meal was all this "dawg" has found
(4)when he spits he really gives out a "deranged code", said he wuz gone for tourin? it wuz just a trip on the road!
(5)calls himself a king, but hes just the queen, which means its reversed hes the son and im the real daddy.
(6)now includin the mom may sound herbish to many, but really the herbs r those who think NNN is the best of RV.
(7)he's here one day and said he wuz the best, well there are 19 people that u just couldnt put to rest.
(8)offered to help me cuz he though i wuz dry, least hes honest when he said that if he did he would "commit suicide"
(9)he leaves people "black and blue" but it aint skill from his rhymes, theres so much wackness, skill is the last thing that enters their minds.
(10)4 days after xmas he gets his 21st birthday, he gets an elimnation, dont u just love these holidays?
(11)gonna drink egg nog and try to "beat some teens", scarin little kids in the only way he can get some "candy."
(12)many said hed win, well thats 2 million lost, apparantly he had to save up the money before he could pay this "cost"

I will explain later. I just want to get the verse in before the dead line. Cuz the explanations take too long to do. px

(1) Master of Punchlines in his sig, punchin his lines like on a punchin bag or sometin like that, ya wordplay.
(2) No Name Needed- NNN-Triple N, "Queen"-hes from queens, posted man y complaints in the wrong forum, Women bitch, referrin to queen. mostly wordplay
(3) King come bak-came bak after some inactivness, when he first got here he didnt get a "warm" welcome, "dawg" cold meal, dawg meal, ya wordplay.
(4) deranged code-his avatar isnt matrix, just some deranged code, tourin: he went on your, a road trip, ya word play.
(5) "king is back" in his sig, queen, ya. called me son, its reversed. ya.
(6) Notin to explain
(7) One day here and he said wuz the best, has 19 losses, not the best.
(8) he imed me and said hed help cuz i said i wuz brain dead=dry, he said if he helped me hed be dead.
(9) his name is black and blue.
(10) his bday is dec 29, he will be 21
(11) egg nog, hes old enough to drink legally, people spike egg nog, hes 21, most people here r in their teens, "candy"- my bday is close to halloween and ya "candy", well not that hard to kno wut i wuz implyin
(12) people said hed win, he has like 4000 dollars, 2 million dollars, he has to save it.

there ya go, anythin that needed to be explained. px

10 min to spare. whew.

Am I racist? for hatin' da many faces dis kid places
His wackness is sickenin'..........
.....only good characters in his verses is da spaces
Wackness is in his DNA, so from its rules he can't stray
Elevation's like his name change, went from wack to played
He's indicated he's frustrated an its causin him dismay
Cuz he gets no respect...........
.....he's as celebrated as a jehovah witness's birthday
Your ego's overblown if you think u topplin' my throne
I got fans, ya "disc" wouldn't get spins on a rodery phone
Your battles are ignored by not one, but da whole board
You spit all ya verses in ya room.........
............................& even ya place rugs aren't "floored"
This like da presidency has two slots, an your playin' keri
Ya nothin', only time your "above the rest" is at cemetaries

(10) his bday is dec 29, he will be 21
(11) egg nog, hes old enough to drink legally, people spike egg nog, hes 21, most people here r in their teens, "candy"- my bday is close to halloween and ya "candy", well not that hard to kno wut i wuz implyin



^^^^Oh man I wish u posted these explanations before I dropped.....yo anyone dat can do math will notice in my profile it says I was born DEC.29,1985...which makes me still 18 as of today.....lmao...where u get 21 from?

(1)triple n wut u gotta realize even in these live
, punchin ya rhymes doesnt mean that u can "master punchlines"
not a good punch no personal good multies bad opener
(2)theres "no name needed" to describe wut this "queen" has done,
calls people herb but he "bitches" in the wrong forum
stupid again
(3)the king has come back just to be decrowned,
a "cold welcome" meal was all this "dawg" has found
no punch really blah
(4)when he spits he really gives out a "deranged code"
, said he wuz gone for tourin? it wuz just a trip on the road!
ok punch nothing special
(5)calls himself a king, but hes just the queen,
which means its reversed hes the son and im the real daddy.
played stupid
(6)now includin the mom may sound herbish to many,
but really the herbs r those who think NNN is the best of RV.
dumb
(7)he's here one day and said he wuz the best,
well there are 19 people that u just couldnt put to rest.
yea uve put none to rest lol ok personal not very good though
(8)offered to help me cuz he though i wuz dry
, least hes honest when he said that if he did he would "commit suicide"
ok not very good u kinda dissed urself
(9)he leaves people "black and blue" but it aint skill from his rhymes
, theres so much wackness, skill is the last thing that enters their minds.
blah no personal plaed
(10)4 days after xmas he gets his 21st birthday,
he gets an elimnation, dont u just love these holidays?
wrong age birthday ist a holiday and ur getting a loss boo
(11)gonna drink egg nog and try to "beat some teens",
scarin little kids in the only way he can get some "candy."
ok punch better than most of em lol
(12)many said hed win, well thats 2 million lost,
apparantly he had to save up the money before he could pay this "cost"
dumb played
ok 12 lines not bars hoe read the rules know the facts
ur dqd but ill let u get kod u just got pimpette slapped
LIKE WHOA !@ SEC KEYSTYLE I WIN LOL


Am I racist? for hatin' da many faces dis kid places
His wackness is sickenin'..........
.....only good characters in his verses is da spaces
kinda funny pretty good not ur best
Wackness is in his DNA, so from its rules he can't stray
Elevation's like his name change, went from wack to played
personal omg first this battle
He's indicated he's frustrated an its causin him dismay
Cuz he gets no respect...........
.....he's as celebrated as a jehovah witness's birthday
nice punck i liked it lol was funny
Your ego's overblown if you think u topplin' my throne
I got fans, ya "disc" wouldn't get spins on a rodery phone
funny ur original uunlike someone in this thread
Your battles are ignored by not one, but da whole board
You spit all ya verses in ya room.........
............................& even ya place rugs aren't "floored"
i thought this was dumb lol
This like da presidency has two slots, an your playin' keri
Ya nothin', only time your "above the rest" is at cemetaries
pretty good
u killed him u had personals u came witty and had original punches
he was too dumb to even dropp the right amount of lines :(

Yeah.....that was way more than 12 lines....he just bunches it up like it wasn't really 24....lol

Even if you did count them all, I still think Triple had this one :thumbup:

personify:

(1)triple n wut u gotta realize even in these lives, punchin ya rhymes doesnt mean that u can "master punchlines"
^^ehh decent 5/10
(2)theres "no name needed" to describe wut this "queen" has done, calls people herb but he "bitches" in the wrong forum
^^ wack 3/10
(3)the king has come back just to be decrowned, a "cold welcome" meal was all this "dawg" has found
ehh.. OK 4/10
(4)when he spits he really gives out a "deranged code", said he wuz gone for tourin? it wuz just a trip on the road!
ur best bar so far 7/10
(5)calls himself a king, but hes just the queen, which means its reversed hes the son and im the real daddy.
doesnt rhyme 1/10
(6)now includin the mom may sound herbish to many, but really the herbs r those who think NNN is the best of RV.
wack 3/10
(7)he's here one day and said he wuz the best, well there are 19 people that u just couldnt put to rest.
decent 4/10
(8)offered to help me cuz he though i wuz dry, least hes honest when he said that if he did he would "commit suicide"
i guess thats a personal lol not sure tho 6/10
(9)he leaves people "black and blue" but it aint skill from his rhymes, theres so much wackness, skill is the last thing that enters their minds.
decent wordplay 5/10
(10)4 days after xmas he gets his 21st birthday, he gets an elimnation, dont u just love these holidays?
wack + fake personal 2/10
(11)gonna drink egg nog and try to "beat some teens", scarin little kids in the only way he can get some "candy."
wtf doesnt rhyme and its wack -5/10.. AND YES THAT IS NEGATIVE 5
(12)many said hed win, well thats 2 million lost, apparantly he had to save up the money before he could pay this "cost"
wtf ? 2/10

overall: 37/120 (31%)

and your verse was 12 bars not 12 lines

triple_N:

Am I racist? for hatin' da many faces dis kid places
His wackness is sickenin'..........
.....only good characters in his verses is da spaces
^^decent opener 6/10
Wackness is in his DNA, so from its rules he can't stray
Elevation's like his name change, went from wack to played
^^decent personal 6/10
He's indicated he's frustrated an its causin him dismay
Cuz he gets no respect...........
.....he's as celebrated as a jehovah witness's birthday
^^good meta wack punch 6/10
Your ego's overblown if you think u topplin' my throne
I got fans, ya "disc" wouldn't get spins on a rodery phone
^^finally a dope bar in this battle 8/10
Your battles are ignored by not one, but da whole board
You spit all ya verses in ya room.........
............................& even ya place rugs aren't "floored"
^^decent bar 6/10
This like da presidency has two slots, an your playin' keri
Ya nothin', only time your "above the rest" is at cemetaries
^^set up wack punch wack wack closer 4/10

overall : 36/60 (60%)

vote: triple_N

it's pitiful when triple_N used 6 less bars and only had one less point :(

I vote triple because ambient you used too many lines...and hey its better than just dquing you...