CarsonJet -v- Dope Name
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112432
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Dope Name
Easy...son... U should've dropp'd wit some one u could carry.. Good news tho... Dope,...U can visit Massachusetts now...and get married My merkin's varry...yes, but u continue to lose even.. 3 an 3... Who's gonna break the news to ur L's that there now leading? Really... What your father called u as a kid, isn't what we mean Dope? not really...Your just a confused R and B teen... Competition's slow...consider urself a pick up herb... Ironic tho... They'll be doin that for U once they remover my words.. But hey.. Atleast ur in the right position,^Far away from me^... Seriously....wait... I merked you before...yo check your IP! |
No need to rush this one,oh fine, I might as well take my time
Hell, he doubled my norm, but will that really double his rhyme Have you tryin' to explain the loss when i bust the facts to ya It must be hard battlin' now, your verses have to be on viagra I'll take this one like a happy meal, but you, you have to steal Do you think you win with flying colors when all you see is teal Not a celtic man, so don't think about reppin a number 34 now Say you win, you'll be lossed by ten, you sit and wonder how Want me to give icin', I'll give you ricin, now you're sale pricin Like satan, I'll stab you with a triton, and you leave frightened :D this was fun... |
Nice verse carson
Just as somethin' to say about the IP line "You can drop a ball to the floor as many times as you want, but you never know if the next time you do it the ball will float to the cealing" |
dayum...truthfully...this was a merking. Dope didn't even come bad at all...but Carson dropped hot today...one of his better verses infact.
"Easy...son... U should've dropp'd wit some one u could carry.. Good news tho... Dope,...U can visit Massachusetts now...and get married" ^Battle was basically over after that first bar was dropped lol. Punchlines go to carson...same with flow...and pretty much everything goes to him. Good battle but carson came hella hard here. Enjoyed reading both verses. v/ - Carson |
uh.....carson, could you uh....kinda explain that line, it makes no sense to me, Getting married in massachusettes? yes because that was awesome :/ *I'm confused now*
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I dont have to explain ne thing....
read the news son... |
fair enough...
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Got it
Yeah that was a really good punch nice job... |
Ummm...gays go to Mass. to get married i think..
that was a nice punch...Dope..didn't ne of yours except for tha Teal one...both flow'd good in certain spots... And tha ip line was a good personal too both had okay wordplay...semi creative but punches and personals won this so v/ Carson |
flow-jet
structure-jet punches-jet personals-jet creativity-tie jet takes this battle easly...dope...you got merked this round hit these up so i can battle again and i will return honest votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111925 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. read strobes voting rule, hoe - Feeble Minded |
*idea*
why don't you guys vote on my other battle... Just a suggestion... |
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