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[Wk1]Skiddz vs N LitEnd
Verses Due: Tuesday February 3rd, 2004
Voting Ends: Saturday February 9th, 2004 Topic: Public Service Announcement |
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Hi N-Lit..
Checkity Check. |
Public Service Announcement..
Your Guest Speaker: SkiddZ This is My declaration, but my Independance is still Pending Already the Time to think about Time, For the Offending Noticeably, your getting weak, The hateful troops, Falling asleep And Don't you know the Good guys always win.. Inheritence, The land For the Meek.. Speak Up, America is the Land of the Free, Complicate Simple Mind Look in Your Gold Mind, Dig it out, See what You things You can Find Because Love don't make the World go round, it makes Your feelings Porous And if it did, It wouldn't be fast enough for us to Notice.. Im Speaking to You, But it depends on yourself to see if You can get the message Keep Your head in the sky, We'll escape this purgatory to we've been sentenced Im making declarations, But I know I'm still always Dependant Take Your side..Because fact is, Defense will still always be Offended. I'm speaking to which, Hold Up their beliefs, to the permanent visit to Graveyards.. I'll stick By Mine.. Fuck Hollywood, Because Soon enough, the Sun Sets on their Boulevard... I'll never sell out, because I can't throw my life out..On Petty Earth Allowance And I hoped it help, Now I conclude my Public Service Announcement.. Peace. |
I Wont Be Able To Make The Deadline...I've Been Swamped With So Much Work Recently Its Beyond A Joke.
If I Could Get A 24h Extension, I Would Be Grateful, But If Not Its Cool, Skiddz Can Have The Win...He Did Make The Deadline. |
N lit
extension given...due wednesday next time, if you need an extension post in Anything Else thread |
^If You didn't give him an extension, I would've left the league, lol.
I can't stand having No Show Wins.. |
Here You Stay, Away From Truth And Leave Human Rights Alone
So I Ask, Where Are You Now? Coz I Know You’re Not At Home Criticisms You Are Prone, Stand Up, Speak Out…Use Your Voice Its Your Choice, But Can You Help Suffering Without Making A Noise? Its Will Be Alright I Hear You Say… I Never Heard Such Hypocrisy & When The Time Passes, The Will Be Screams Of Fuck Democracy Simple Pleadings, Life’s A Joke, Look Around And What Do You See Me Being Me, Others Being He, & Dreamers Living A Golden Jubilee Parades Begin Shower Down, But Why? Parades Fall As The Men Fall Hypnotic Speakers Lead Away From Whats What, No Logic, Its Mental So Be Glorified, Speak Out On What Screws Up In Society Today Don’t Say Tomorrow, Coz Everytime Its Tomorrow, Its Today To Hear An Un Biased Voice To Speak From You Mind…Outstanding Oppose Those Who Chose Death Over Freedom…That’s My Announcement Sorry For The Extreme Lateness...Next Week Will Be Alot Easier For Me. |
v/ N litend
I thought you had alot of good concepts...felt emotion....good vocab...it was actually pretty good Skiddz....wasnt feelin urs u didnt come as prepared....had nothing special too it...ive seen better |
skiddz... thought your verse started strongly, with a good smoothe scheme and nice approach to the topic, with well ordered vocab, in the right places, but thought that the scheme got a bit basic towards the middle for a couple of bars... then picked back up and ended it nicely.... all in all i liked the concept and thought it was executed pretty good...
N LitEnd... thought you had the better flow going, but the bad rhyme in the middle spoilt it for me... also your approach to the topic didnt sway me enought to give you the vote... i thought it was a little too short aswell, but still a good read and tight scheme.... but my vote goes=skiddz |
Gotta say Skiddz as well...
I think they both had the same message... Bad government...bad representation of it, bad feelings toward it... But, I think Skidzz is trying to encourage the depressed troops in his, let em know that Michael Moore and Matrin Sheen suck... While NLitEnd is only speaking his mind to us. I thought that added a nice twist to the story. NLitEnd definately had the structure and format here...good flow off of it. So, I'm picking story and nice twist over the flow... Cuz I really think complexity, vocab, meaning, emotion... Were all even. I liked the topic and direction Skiddz took his in better. Good from both though... Peace |
tough to judge..very close..
I liked N Litend's approach, good flow..nice vocab.. With some emotion to add on a nice little touch.. SkiddZ was just a very strong piece.. Also..same quality in vocab and flow.. It just won me over on how you approached it.. Both had sort of the same concept.. I just liked how skiddz attacked it.... So my v/SkiddZ |
Vote : Skiddz
Both had a pretty nice verse .. Seemed to be on almost the same take of the topic .. Both had well written and thought out verses .. But based on the fact that both were almost alike I have to go with Skiddz because I think he took the topic a little more deeper and juss gave a better overall verse in my opinion .. Nice battle fellas .. Keep writin' .. One |
Skiddz wins
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