D.J em sce Vs. Axiom
 

yo lets get this over with

Rules:

30 minute blind spit-no pre writtens.....

no hate
no d/r
no b/s votes only fully explained ones.......
no diting.....
no recycling...

May the best man win..............

once u check in then we both start our spit ight.............

yo, da fuk is 'diting'? i always dit, so i ain't gon b able to battle foo!

lol i meant no biting.......now type in....Check In....i aint got all day...........

you know, if i wasnt high, i dont think axe's smart ass remarks would be funny, but because i am, they are pretty funny, LOL!

^yo foo, u no u luv me, fag. don't act like u all straite, get wiv da luvin.

ill take dat as a check in have urs by 30 mins aight ho.....and i asked kuniva in a pm if he luvs u n he said no LoL

he denigying it. that fag, u luv me two, get wiv da luvin. :hump:

its like u walkin up da stairway 2 heaven da way ur stepin up 2 da greatest//
u pickin up an "L" to a god so theres no reason to hate this//
I bust more SIC flows than you can flow when your SICK//
your like a constipated kid on a toilet, ur never dropin ill shit//
on R.B im a legend with my words, "W's comin so fast dey pass blurs//
you might think im ur neighborhood pusher the way i bag these herbs//
gotta make an alias 2 win,but like Butcha n Toon ull b placed on suspension//
cuz my abstract thoughts will overtake ur adolescent intentions//
if u got a weak stomach dont bite,ull find my rhymes hard 2 digest//
n even if u plagerized u still couldnt win,so how u eva gonna progress//
when push cums 2 shove not even M.C Hammer could touch this lyricist//
on R.B i just be fukin around and still leavin these kids with cyphilis//

^^^^^^^^^^^^WTF^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


And Axiom Said Front Lines Was Full of Herbs? LMAO

Only On Verse and This Kid Already Voted...

LMAO...Uppin For Axioms Verse...

Nice Drop DJ

~R~

*Sigh* Kids still posting that verses were the same calibur. I give up. Morons. :banghead:

DJ EM SCE
its like u walkin up da stairway 2 heaven da way ur stepin up 2 da greatest//
u pickin up an "L" to a god so theres no reason to hate this//
-nice opener...got me interested in his flo...y axe wud git a L to a god

I bust more SIC flows than you can flow when your SICK//
your like a constipated kid on a toilet, ur never dropin ill shit//
-i liked this bar..first line liked tha wordplay...second line had me thinkin... nice shitt

on R.B im a legend with my words, "W's comin so fast dey pass blurs//
you might think im ur neighborhood pusher the way i bag these herbs//
-one of tha best bars in this verse...good flo, but tha first line wuz confusin..at first..i caught it l8r

gotta make an alias 2 win,but like Butcha n Toon ull b placed on suspension//
cuz my abstract thoughts will overtake ur adolescent intentions//
good vocab on this one...i guess that wuz a punch??shoulda came harder tho..not tha best bar

if u got a weak stomach dont bite,ull find my rhymes hard 2 digest//
n even if u plagerized u still couldnt win,so how u eva gonna progress//
GOOD PUNCHES...liked tha vocab-u sed plagerized instead of common word like "bite"

when push cums 2 shove not even M.C Hammer could touch this lyricist//
on R.B i just be fukin around and still leavin these kids with cyphilis//
damn..not tha STD syphiliis..that's harsh..good closer
OVERALL-nice vocab and wordplay..a few points lost on punches...i give it a 7/10

Axiom's break down is on tha next reply

AXIOM-tha bitch
DJ's chasing a victory, and it's playing hard to get.
I would've ended your career... but it hasn't started yet.
--good opener...almost played but not quite..soo...good opener

So when I trash this fuck, he'll be napping in the ocean.
I don't know what's worse, ya verse, or the fact that you're postin.
--good punches in this bar...i liked tha last line in it

It's true, I fucked your mom, but I didn't expect the condom to break.
So when I clown you, don't trip, I'm just correctin' mistakes.
--FIRST LINE IS PLAYEEEDDD OUTTT..second line wuz OK..still a lil played wit that one too

This battle's regressin, you'll feel bad as gays disperse.
You didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse.
--First line is PLAYEEDD..that's 2 in a row......second line is preety Heavy..i liked tha second line..nice punch rite thurr

Axe is the realest with rhymes, so expect me to kill this bitch
The way I shut this dummy up, you'll think Axe's a ventriloquist.
--hmm..OK bar...OK punches...OK vocab...overall OK bar

Lets play, like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
Kid just came out of the closet, and it wasn't during hide-n-go-seek
--mediocre closer...first line wuz weak but tha last line wuz OK
OVERALL-notta whole lot of vocab...great flo...same structure as DJ-good...Punches good 8/10

Results on next post....
sorry there's so many

D.J. Em Sce-nice vocab and wordplay...Flo wuz preety good...good sturcture...a few points lost on punches..but i loved tha verse....i give it a 7/10

Axiom:tha bitch-notta whole lot of vocab...great flo tho...same structure as DJ-good...Punches good....wordplay-missing..i give it a 7.5/10

both of ya'll wurr missing meta4s...wurr they at?
but a great battle
even tho DJ is my leader i gotta go wit tha truth of THIS battle
so VOTE-AXIOM:tha bitch

this is as explained as it gits so accept it or not..its tha truth

Both verses were pretty similiar, started strong, but the edge in the opener goes to DJ MC for sure. The closing bit was also strong, goes to DJ MC again but by very little. The middle for both was kinda weak, with some kinda overused lines by Ax and some weak punches from DJ. Ax also had better flow, but I think DJ MC had a bit better originality... this was a real good battle and I wouldn't mind seeing a repeat. Much props to both of you, but vote goes to DJ MC.

Return the favor, vote on my stuff so I can improve.