Fly-E vs Money Staxx
 

Battle Rules:

6-18 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Ryding
Fair Votes
No Beef

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-22-07 at 04:24 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Expired battle close - tie

Fly-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-07 04:24 PM.

Money Staxx has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-07 04:28 PM.

..FLY-E.. i POP, SPRAY THE CLIPS and i'm HOT!/
GAME JUS SICK but i'm NOT GAY YA BITCH so don't try tah (ROLL WITH ME) with UR FLOW MUSHY LIKE BABY SHIT/
cuz u culdn't ("EXPOSE E") on the "LAS VEGAS STRIP"!!(Omg.....)//
Ya BARS TEENY AND NOT REAL so when DOGS SEE ME DEY HEART FAILS dis poser/
"WATCH T.V." TO "BOX STEEL"!! FLY-E? yeh theres a LARGE MEDIA SPOT THERE!/
cuz im BREAKIN THIS NERD whose FAKING HIS WORDS... I'll leave em "SHAKEN N STIRRED" like "MARTINIS AND COCKTERS AND SPIN U LIKE A HELICOPTER/"!!(FUCK!)//
Shhhh QUIET DOWN YA CHUMPS/
Befo' I leave ya "heart pressed" and theres IRON DOWN YA LUNGS/
I'll make ya NECK RETORT and CHECK YA MONEY STAXX with "TECH SUPPORT"/
So I'm "TYING DOWN THE BUG"!!//
I'm DARK N TWISTED... ya MARK? YA MISSED IT?/
and for ya crew? IS YOUR TEAM ADVANCED?/
well i kno (THIS WHORE NEEDS A CHANCE so i'll "GIVE UR SPLEEN A HAND" like a "DOCTOR'S CHRISTMAS or an OPER./ WISH LIST"!!(operation.....)//
Jus LISTEN TURD! TAKE THE GIFT ya VISION YEARNS FAKELY SCRIPTS?/
LEGIT WORDS MAYBE SHIT! so the (RAPVERSE WILL CATCH YA) n if not ("FLY-E WILL GETCHA") like "CHRISTIANS TURNED ATHEIST"!!(WHOO!)//
I'll put the GUN IN YOU DORK my "beef" have ya RUNNING TO PORK cuz i dun WON AND YOU LOST.. becuz i (SPRAY THE BOMBS QUICKLY) (TAKE AN ARM SWIFTLY) Cuz u culdnt ("LAY IT ON FLY-E's HOME CITY")/
being a "BUM IN DETROIT"!!// And after dis u gonna claim i MIGHT'VE BEAT YA but I DONT NEED YA cuz my FIRE HEATERS RETIRE LEADERS/
and i can (CALL DUDES OUT) cuz it's (ALL NEWS NOW) FLY leaves yall ("ALL POOPED OUT")like "DIARIHEA" (HA!!)//
I'm POPPIN YA DUDE G cuz i'm NOT INTO LOSING so enuff (BEING IN PITY) cuz what i no u put down i will be (READING SO SHITTY) and ya only ("SEEING FLY-E's BIG D CITY") when "WATCHING THE MOVIE"!!//
..Enter the World Of FLY-E NIGGA!.../


OOO well i went over a bit who cares good luck nigga!

Ayo

What up FLY-E, u bout 2 be tha victim of a homi
u a cheerleader, that's tha only u catchin bodies/2
im trying 2 eat, 2 much beef so pass tha cake
but if u really feelin gully, nigga blast away/4
u dont rhyme, sucka ya preach like pastor mase
face like hockey ice, and i slash away/6
im tha black wayne gretzky
lead like a number 2 pencil, i dare this lil nigga come test me/8
cuz u'll be TESTIN YA LUCK, im IMPRESSIVE N SUCH
u got salad bar lines, only nice cuz u DRESSIN'EM UP/10
WRECKIN U UP, leave u crumbling-bleeding - tha way im fuckin u easy u REFLECTIN A SLUT
what, cuz i talk about guns im not a lyricist/12
u silly prick, soft and sweet like Domino's cinna-stixx
FLY-E must be ON E/14
i dont rap, i sell coke - so like tha space bar, im all about them LONG KEYS
transvestite, u faker than ya long weave/16
put u on a permanent vacation, no palm tree's
and i'll handle tha eulogy...tha way im killin this PUSSY, it gotta be ANIMAL CRUELTY/18

Voted For: Money Staxx

What up FLY-E, u bout 2 be tha victim of a homi
u a cheerleader, that's tha only u catchin bodies/2
u dont rhyme, sucka ya preach like pastor mase
face like hockey ice, and i slash away/6
cuz u'll be TESTIN YA LUCK, im IMPRESSIVE N SUCH
u got salad bar lines, only nice cuz u DRESSIN'EM UP/10


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nothing

v/money staxxx

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This was feedback posted for Money Staxx
 

i kinda like ya verse a bit there you got that raw gutta flow and you dont try to rhyme everything but you make them punches stand a bit out... decent stuff but you do got a few things to work on thou....


fly-e you streched alot fo your stuff out for no reason...
and one of your bars talked about hes crew when he aint in none so what the hell???

and for ya crew? IS YOUR TEAM ADVANCED?/
well i kno (THIS WHORE NEEDS A CHANCE so i'll "GIVE UR SPLEEN A HAND" like a "DOCTOR'S CHRISTMAS or an OPER./ WISH LIST"!!(operation.....)//

^^^ what the fuck was all that fam??? wasnt good and he aint downw ith a crew or noting....

this is why i be suspect when u ask to let you in my crew...
this kind of shit make no sense to me i mean you strech your bars far beyond then they should... and you keep on doing this... "blah" (kill ya) / "the block" (peel ya)/ till there no more.. (ooh shit)/

^^ that the fuck is all that???

well you need to fix your sutructure before i can let u join some of ya concept be aight tilly ou strech it out or do them dumb ass shit with ya verse which makes it mad hard to read and follow.....


at the end im not voting or noting just left feed backf or ya to know whats it is...

Good Lookin Ransum I Will Take Ya Advice N Apply It, Upping 4 Voters...

Ya alright me to im fixin this shit up!! Get ready for my new upgraded work!

Voted For: Fly-E

Fly had a more well-rounded verse with more complex punches. Money had a better flow, due to the shorter bars, but Fly won pretty much every other category.

If you'd like to battle Money, set it up and I'm down.

how u gonna vote against me n then ask me 2 battle, yall niggaz funny style...lol

Good loox uppin leave links....................................

I said it incase you didn't like my vote, I gave you an out!


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Voted For: Fly-E

Yo Yall Need To Up Your Structures...........Feel Me?????

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