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New track that's a combination of three verses from 2 collabs I was supposed to do with someone, but of course they're too lazy to actually record anything. The verses are put together on one track with a nice scratch. It's called "Gangsta Music+Lemme Know sampler". Enjoy.

http://doom.dmusic.com

Links: Fed on half the tracks on this page. Fukka link!!

aight first drop was pretty nice overall from flow to the written shit was tight homie, after the scratches... second verse kicks in, shit I like the flow on this one, good use of ya voice, showed some emotion, nice drop overall homie

return tha favor aight: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177309

peace

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werd, i peeped this...and i was feeling the drop after the scratches..shit was raw man...:thumbup:

Thanks for the feed Draxe and Acuity. Draxe I'll check that link.

Up for mas señiors and seiñioritas.

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this was a good drop & i was figuring da concept of da song u got a very intriguing overall quality.......................make sure 2 return the favor in my open mic

thanks. uppage.

aight this was ok...vocals are to loud i think...flow is aight fell off on a couple parts...dont sound to confident on the beat yamean...lyrics were pretty good...delivery aight

aight beat changed

aight flow is coo on this beat...lyrics are coo...delivery is aight...

overall this joint was coo...stay up fam

^^cool. thanks.

first off i like da voice i like rugged sound all i can say is a few times and not many it seemed like you were reading not flowing other than that cadence presence flow was all decent keep it up holla back my man p.s. my preference is net beats there not heard by the world already ya feel me :thumbup:

^^lol word man, I DEF feel you there. There was liek 2 times where I was jsut reading lyrics as I was shifting gears for the next set of lyrics - like during page turns or something lol. I gotta polish that out. But yo, if you got a good source for *GOOD* net beats man - hit me. I'd way rather use original beats, but man most of them blow the big one and sound liek they were made with a Nintendo. If you've got any reccomendations man, I'm all ears...and a few eyes too. Thanks.

Ah hell, lets up this again. Uppin for chest puke.

Nice shit man.
Voice sounds dope on track, at times you sound like your just talking your lyrics which hurts flow. G-unit beats can get played, but you rocked it pretty well. Shits mixed pretty well I thought, couldnt really find any noticable problems this time round. I think if you wanna get your name out as a big time solo artist your gonna need to work on your flow rolling around on the beat more as opposed to being articulate and slow. Lyrics were tight as hell in a punchline kind of style, but if you want my real opinion; to an extent you need to work more on actually saying shit with your lyrics instead of just typical gangsta type punchlines and "I'll fuck you up" type verses.. I havnt heard all your shit so forgive me if you already do that on some tracks, but youll find that people will become real fans of your shit if you give them an insight onto your life on an emotional level.

But yeah, both tracks sounded nice. Just need to work on putting more of a personality into your music so when people hear your shit being played they know exactly whos on the mic and they remember your style.

I got plenty free beats on my page... perhaps you'll like some:

www.soundclick.com/annodominibeats

I like the tracks by the way, your voice is tight on the beats but if you added a little more emotion it would make it even better. Sometimes your flow and delivery sounded a bit forced but overall I was definitely feeling this. Lyrics were nice, beats nice of course. Keep it up!

^^Yeah, thanks for the feedback Nos and Ghost. I def feel both of you on the feeds and I agree on all points. Thanks for letting me know I wasn't theo nly person that sees this.

Nos, yeah, I have some tracks that are more geared specifically about me like "True Story of a Bad Man" and another track coming up, but on tracks liek this, I agree.

Ghost, I'll check those beats. Thanks again. 1