I've Been Runnin...
 

i've been ruunin for a while, seems like i been off track//
but im back, to attact the glamour that comes wit spitten the facts//
see i watched some of these cats who supposed to b all datt//
but they lack real talent an add to the numbers who wack//
i've endured parents lyin in hospital beds pushin out new seeds//
herbs are not wat i need caz im grass an them hoes just weeds//
wat is net beef??? just some shit that i really dont need//
a bunch of 14 year old kids claimin to be P A to the C//
barkin up the wrong tree tryin to shut up an silence me//
but the truth rises like helium for every eye to see//
these cats is puss an i convey that in a literal way//
im not joinin no fuckin crew, i did that back in the day//
my eyes is on the prize like doctor king on the hills of GA//
im focused, let some wide eyed punk try to lead me a stray//
im a vet, the game i see now through experienced optics//
part of the hip-hop FBI here to stop all this pop shit//
i dont usually name drop but here's a bar for those who pop shit//
Avalon fuck suckin why dont you jus go on an slop dick//






an thats all im gonna say about that.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178545
link for feeed aite

dis was short, but sweet.....

a bunch of 14 year old kids claimin to be P A to the C//
^^fav line

but yea good multies n some good punches.....hmmmm structure was iight, wordplay could b worked on a lil bit but good vocab no doubt....hmmmmmmm good piece overall.......keep it up...1

yup...............

Uppin Bastards I Hate Rv Politics

It was aight man, decent wordplay, some things seemed a little forced in plaes, but it was straight, nice flow an decent wordplay, you'll get better as you rhyme more ofetn now that ya back, 7/10 tho'

thankxxxx for the feed
uppin