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uhhh i guess u could this my first open mic freestyle or wuteva....if ya like it...thas coo...if u dont...thas coo

from head-ta-toe, tha king's game is flawless
im runnin tha game like felon--lawless
BigL would roll in his graves if he saw-this
im already big in tha souf' like crawfish
so if u beefin wit King D, u wont b leavin--jus to b honest
now wen u in tha presence of tha king--bow down or get leaned back
cuz my niggaz willin to do mo' shit then uh' fiend-fa-crack
Hav a nigga studderin like dude wit da chipped tooth
Im sik wit it, im jus so un-couth
u might c me in da street like TIP
but dont come my way unless u wanna D-I-E
cuz my aim is pinpoint, its jus so hypnotiq, like B-I-G
and my cup stay leaned-up
my wrist n rims stay gleamed-up
not to mention, my street stay fiend-up
but my game still stay cleand-up--cuz tha name .D.Hug

uppin 4 feedback or input niggaz

it was aight in da beginnin...da middle was OK...n da endin was blah

5/10

ok thanks fa feed i guess