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DON 06-26-04 12:27 AM

DON <VS> Da MaGiCiAn 7
 
aight regularn rules
no feeding
no biting
no crew hate or d/r
verses due by 12:10 eastern time tonite aight good luck pc

DON 06-26-04 12:31 AM

its a 10 line verse i forgot to post that so im chekin in

Da MaGiCiAn 7 06-26-04 12:31 AM

its 12:30 eastern time dawg how im gon do dat lmao...

Da MaGiCiAn 7 06-26-04 12:32 AM

You drop first...I'll drop 20 minutes afta my check in afta u spit iight dawg good luck n erything but i think imma rip u lolz iight ~!i1i!~

DON 06-26-04 12:48 AM

no dont be pussy ur gona drop by 1 15 the same time as me

Da MaGiCiAn 7 06-26-04 12:56 AM

iight im spittin den but im spittin a 20 line verse i told u in da PM So dont even try nuttin stupid iight ~!i1i!~

Da MaGiCiAn 7 06-26-04 01:08 AM

http://community.rapbattles.com/pri...wpm&pmid=186513

Da MaGiCiAn 7 06-26-04 01:10 AM

I told u 20 lines heres ma lines and dont even think of tryin ne dumb shit cuz i told u it was a 20 line battle iight so check it dawg



Bitch slappin, shit clappin, hook niggaz na im jus fist yappin...
Quit rappin, clip fastend, u think u nice but dats strict actin.....
Bettah be prepared, cuz im comin up fo u like haunted humans...
I'll be stompin u den, have u hidin in mexico like wanted cubans..
imma flash past wit leave a big gash in ya ass on da Deep part....
+ i'll leave ya brains on da road and u still couldnt be street smart....
Talk shit ta me den u gon get fucked up bad, push me....
Eryday u wake up wit a cat on ya face n say 'I get maad pussy'....
Dis peice wild, magician is sick u gotta be blind if u can't see child....
You actin like dis is a 'lost n found' da way u think u got 'free styles'.....
U a manwhore da way u dress u look like u a free guy.....
If i 'threw ya shirt up in da air' ya style still couldnt be 'fly'....
U conbulsing SHIT! clear, i can kill da best so bitch FEAR!....
U so easy 2 Tear like on ya shoulda derres a tag dat says rip here...
Wutchu reppin B, u thought, But i aint sorry so who u swettin G?....
How you gonna think u bettah when ya punches r jus Pettin me.........
Im smylin look at all da wins im pylin, beat u down wit a medalion....
I orderd a pizza and look who was at da door don da retarded italian.....

~F!!N!!SHA~
Crazed maniacs like u keep thinkin dat dey can beat me....
Ma flow is streaky?, i gave u birth and dis is how u treat me?...

Hold dat lets see wutchu got, No beef jus a battle dawg ~!i1i!~

DON 06-26-04 01:12 AM

this magicians scared...he even wants me to drop first...
like Hudoni hes afraid he cant break out...when i send him to his herst...
your biggest trick...would be if you get some votes...
he says hey mom turn down simon and garfunkel...tell me if these rhymes are dope...
your just another win...that im gona pull out my hat...
fuckin rabbit rappins for men...so you cant deal wit that...
lyrcial legends?...your nuthin cause rour all jus startin...
your biggest publicity will be wen i make you appear on the back of milk cartons...
he tried to delay cause to prewrite he couldnt find his pencil...
you got no rhymin talent...even a retard is considered more special...

now u got 3 minutes left if u didnt drop yet and i will dq u good luck

DON 06-26-04 01:14 AM

u aint tell me no 20 lines till after i finished my cverse i already said 10 lines dont be fuckin stupid bersides al;l those lines came out ur notebook u can tell cept the one bout italian good job u can come up wit one rhyme i said ten lines u dumb fuck so deal wit it

Cocaine 06-26-04 01:43 AM

yo good battle... magician it looks like u prewrote that shit.. but u did too much self glorification and ur lines were long.. u had a pretty good verse tho overall... i liked dons verse too good punches and structure... but the thing that won the battle was dons punches and magicians stuff looked prewritten... so overall my vote has to go to don..

Gods son 06-26-04 01:47 AM

Theres many reasons why The don won this battle...i dunno for 1) Magician didnt even use any personals..i mean how do u win a battle by just rhyming..and that shit looks prewritten...anyway don used alot of metas and multis and his punches hit b/c they were personals..a little close to home..

my vote...don

Mafia Soldier 06-26-04 02:04 AM

DON whats your problem im the number 1 italian on this site get outa here.magician ur verse was weak kinda sounded like prewrite but the punches were still weak. i liked the one about the retarded italian it was funny. good rhymes and good multis in the beginning. nice rhyme in the opener.all in all i gota say 6.5 outa 10.

don kinda weak verse u elevated since we battled a lot. u had a lota personals not bad and most of your punches hit hard a couple were weak.good rhyming.simon and garfuncl haha aight all in all it was close but i give it to don for harder punches and fresh verse no prewrites there overall 8/10 nice battle people. but don it still dont change that ur a bitch and were gona battle again cause im bak and ill beat u this time

v/don
return the favor on some of my battles if theyre still open

Introspect. 06-26-04 02:54 AM

yeah i think don won this battle because basically his punches hit alot harder then magicans and it flow'd betta and he used personals magican i really didnt see a whole lot of personals and your punches didnt really connect and hit as hard so my votes goes to don

o yea i forgot to get tha link but i voted here so go drop a vote on my battle wit economics and my battle wit andu09 i need to get that shit closed pc

DON 06-26-04 05:14 PM

thanks for feedback uppin.........................


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