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vinman 05-17-04 08:32 PM

unholy wun vs. vinman
 
ok bitch u no the rules 10-20 lines no hate or crew od d/r iight pls dont cheat i no u gona win

vinman 05-17-04 08:33 PM

u spit first

MoTiF 05-17-04 08:34 PM

No 30 mins each.

Enhance 05-17-04 08:34 PM

vinman EFL?

vinman 05-17-04 08:35 PM

iight lest do this

Sean.C 05-17-04 08:47 PM

tight battle i think unholy wins

MoTiF 05-17-04 08:50 PM

Ight No Feeding.

Kid i had beef with ur Punk ass Since Yout Tried to Down Me//
Your a noob callin me one was not smart you shouldnt cross ur Boundry//
Ur a hard ass 12 year old Sportin ur Ava straight up a X-Man//
Vinman u cant Touch me im Swingin Steel punches u hit like a Tin-Can//
Why do u have A merked list when you battle The littlest Emcee//
Ur at the Very Bottom of the Game im at the Top u can evan See-Me//
Ur Saliva Consists of Nothing but water mine is a Liquid Butane//
While you cant Sustain Your Not gonna be alive with no like to Remain//
You decided you could come Play with the Big Dogs but ill Eat-Ur-Rhymes//
Ur slow to Post Pre-Written Horrid Rhymes im Real and i Beat-Ur-Times//
I c a Young Kid Tryin to be a Hot-Shot when we all really Know-Ur-Now//
Ill end ur life Faster then u can Call 911 im worse then a Blood-Clot//
Heres were i Finish Off ur Royal Crushing Maybe you Will-Learn//
Ur were Ez to Rip like Aluminum Foil so I watch ur Body-Burn//

Bitch.

MoTiF 05-17-04 08:51 PM

Know-Ur-Now should be Know-ur-Not.
gonna be alive with no like to Remain//should be "Ur not lickly to Remain"

Ight sry typin fast

vinman 05-17-04 08:58 PM

ok fina spit



check it im comin at this nigga with tha speed of. light....balling my fist tight...knocking him down down with all my damn might comin at this nigga some crazy ass shit,unlike his his broke ass flow thats messed up and 2 bit(garbage)
i bet he prewritten and hoping that he win.. because more i spit he coming closer to his end




what kind name is that the fucking holy wun... i bet his whole family is filled with retarded nuns.. im shot him with 22. an all kind heat.. i bet u his verse is classic..... old timing ....and neat.im knocking holy with punches and he starting to bleed.. but im going easy on u........ U SAY CAN SAY ITS A GOOD DEED.. i bet holy crying and wish he left me the fuck alone.. while he bitching to his mama on a long distance phone

vinman 05-17-04 09:00 PM

me too and divine i havent even spit yet u d/r

MoTiF 05-17-04 09:01 PM

Lol he was making fun of u.But anyway that was umm Bad.

Uppin

Enhance 05-17-04 09:08 PM

Vinman please elevate before you battle here again.
You lost . .
blah Wun verse was`nt the best in history but it was far better than your`s vin you`re verse looked like you were telling a story messy structure and all anyway wun came harder with punches and i could not see vins punches

V/WUN

please vote on my battle vs accomplishment.

Restricted 05-17-04 10:00 PM

Aiyo..Easy Win For UnHoly Wun...

Vinman: 2/10
You Alteast Tried To Diss, But Your Spit Lacked Everything A Respectable Spit Should Include. You Need To Go To The Help Threads, Look At Sum Of The Hot Battles On Here, and Study Them Deeply..

Unholy Wun: 5/10
Wasn't Feeling Your Punches That Much, No Real Word-Play and The Sentece Structures Are Fucked.....Your PUnches Were Alright But You Need Better Concepts and Metaphors. Don't Get Me WRong Nice Spit In All...But I Just Am Trying To Help.

Nice Drop To Wun

Vote - Unholy Wun

~R~

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-18-04 04:29 PM

Vin... You Need To Elevate' ...!! Lmfao That Is All Imma Say' WTF Was That Shit You Dropped Anyways... Haha' ..!! That Shit Was Hallarious' Couldn't Even Follow Most Of Your Shit' ..!!

Anyways... UnHoly Wun Takes This One Easily

vinman 05-18-04 08:29 PM

yall all are some dick riders fuck yall


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