Abstrakt Vs. Big Chase
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Nice Picture Flow...
I've Already Thought Up An ILL Concept For It... .One. |
same but i just started on my topical league verse so yeah.....
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why didnt i get a good pic like so =(
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the cold wind blows my hair through my helmet as I ride
so peaceful the machine and I, all is calm on the inside wishing to forget the travesty I have just created praying of sins and that I will not end up just as ill fated My escape flawless, but not stained with the blood of others people sprawled upon the floor, dead mothers, sisters, and brothers A tear slides down my cheek as I silently remeber the events From the end to begining, knowing theres no way I can repent .:EvEnT:. The plan was simple open the door, and yell with a gun in hand AS I walked in I yelled to get donw but one didnt follow my command I aimed the gun at his head pulled the tirgger and blood splattered That was my dearest mistake for taking a life as if it didnt matter As the body was orlled for th theif of possesions the face became clear THe resemblance of my father's gentle and kind face, was the pressing fear I screamed surrounded by pain, and outside voices, engulfed by the rage I open fired my weapon of death, in a insane murderous haze Yet his heartbeat I hear, I must get away fomr this insanity What was supposed to be a simple robbing has turned into calamity .:Ride:. The wind, signifies the calm from the calamity, I relax regret clouds my capacity for peace, distracted as cars blaze past A church I see, and I turn against traffic to find God Was blinded by a light calling me home as I knew what was wrong the truck rounded the corner not seeing me and clipped the bike it spun and as lost control I smilled knowing all would be all right hit the gorund lsiding with the bike through the churches glass windows alone cold and dark in torment till I heard a heavenly crescendo blood stops pouring from my mouth as a heavenly hand reaches out It picks up my broken body ascending past the world into clouds as I look down on m y former planet from my heavenly hurst I feel pity for all the pain and suffering endured on earth |
Wooooow...
Way To Jock A Dick Chase... That Comment Was So Groupie It's Not Even Funny... .One. |
lol...............when ya ognna drop.......iono what to do first.....im confused so many things to work on....
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You Can Have It...
I Need To Focus On The Tournament... .One. |
naw man...drop...ake ya time.......
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No Ones Even Running This...
Im The Only Other Mod Left And My Time Is Pressed... |
oh....well....farewell.....we should battle as a farewell battle lol
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uppin.....
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Abstrakt Loses By Forfit... BigChase Will Advance... .One. |
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