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NoCkTerNuL 05-07-09 09:38 AM

NoCkTerNuL vs Da Problem Child
 
Battle Rules:

8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

you know the rules... no cheating...
good luck...

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 05-08-09 at 03:38 PM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

System 05-07-09 10:56 AM

Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-09 10:56 AM.

Da Problem Child 05-07-09 03:05 PM

let me hurry up and drop this verse before my teacher says something...lol

im in school,itz 4th period, your getting riped in class
this bitch is trash, beating me is like tryin to break bricks with glass
so skip fast, ill stretch his name, phisically leaving him in high-scares
cause ill NOK him out and TURN AL his dreams into nighmares
its all clear, the only reason he hasnt been cliped and crackled
is cuz he's always on someones sack like a defensive takle "lol"
I stole your belt, with flows that melt and unload you wealth
he's still a virgin, but never struggles on getting a hold on himself
(get it)

System 05-07-09 04:21 PM

NoCkTerNuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-09 04:21 PM.

NoCkTerNuL 05-07-09 04:28 PM

"eatin nigga's alive", that's what you said...
a cannibal? naw homie you just good at giving head
like a prostitute that's something you can relate
desperately PMing for battle just so you can get raped!!(1)
i'm back in action attacking whack flows, YOU'RE MINE!!
Hampton Gangsta??? HA! your whole city committed 3 crimes!
I keep it hot, droppin verses to top yours that are mild...
After this you won't be a problem no more, just a child!!

1 He PMed me to battle...

NoCkTerNuL 05-07-09 04:30 PM

wooo! i haven't battled in soo long... it feels good. good verse man...
alright let's get some votes!!

NoCkTerNuL 05-08-09 01:40 AM

dang this site is D-E-A-D!! votes anyone? feedback? anything?

Implicit 05-08-09 02:33 AM

Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

da problem child - i guess you had some okay lines. but a lot of it didnt even make sense. it sounds like you put words in there just so it rhymed with your punch....really...what is getting "cliped and crackled" or "high scares"? that doesnt even make sense. if it doesnt fit, then just dont do it.

nockternul - mehh...not bad but not the greatest. you actually got a personal in there. that line about the hampton gangsta reminded me of the line Jada used in his diss against 50 cent.


i vote nockternul..he didnt try to force anything that didnt make sense like other dude.

Da Problem Child 05-08-09 08:28 AM

thanx 4 da vote..........anywayz uppin...............

Da Problem Child 05-08-09 08:32 AM

and 4 one hampton,VA is not the subburbs.......you have it mistaken with "the hamptons"

NoCkTerNuL 05-10-09 04:17 AM

i thought the hamptons was in new york or something, not virginia... anyways, can someone please vote so we can close this battle already...

13th. 05-10-09 11:38 AM

Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

i'm back in action attacking whack flows, YOU'RE MINE!!
Hampton Gangsta??? HA! your whole city committed 3 crimes!
I keep it hot, droppin verses to top yours that are mild...
After this you won't be a problem no more, just a child!!

the best punches in your verse,you needed to just add more personals!then it would have been better.started of not so good,but got better as it got near the end!

vs

I stole your belt, with flows that melt and unload you wealth
he's still a virgin, but never struggles on getting a hold on himself

the best line in the whole battle but that was the only good one in your whole verse!some of it was forced like the play on his name.some of the punches could have been made harder to!

v/Nok

NoCkTerNuL 05-12-09 05:26 AM

thanks for voting jin, uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppin! please vote...

NoCkTerNuL 05-12-09 06:21 PM

yo we need votes so we can close this battle already!!! VOTE UP!!!

the kid n8 05-12-09 09:01 PM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

clearly won come guys why you using hate votes

"so skip fast, ill stretch his name, phisically leaving him in high-scares
cause ill NOK him out and TURN AL his dreams into nighmares"

NoCkTerNuL 05-13-09 03:49 AM

^^^^That's a D/R vote, that's not an explanation... but whatever... anyone else wanna D/R? Can we please get some good votes with explanations? Uppin...

Da Problem Child 05-13-09 08:28 AM

uppin.........really dont give a fuck about hate votes, it shows how immature people can be.....

NoCkTerNuL 05-13-09 03:34 PM

how's dude guna come in here and say everyone used hate votes, when he's the only one that didn't explain his vote? Whatever dude, i just want some good honest votes on this, that are guna help me get better... Uppin... VOTE UP!!!

Da Problem Child 05-14-09 08:50 AM

same hear.........................................

Da Problem Child 05-14-09 02:20 PM

damn!....... can we get some votes Pleaze!!!!!!!!!

MurDaH187 05-15-09 03:27 PM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

Flow: child
Punches: child
Metea's: child
Personal: knock
Concept: child
Multis: none
Opener: child
Closure: child

Vote child

He basicly won hands down with harder verse and all around better verse from jump tp finish I see you got a bit better child but step ya game up to a grown man world lol just fucking with ya but good shit

Knoc
I've seen better from you and this wasn't it you lack in everything and useally come harder so keep on practising....

NoCkTerNuL 05-15-09 04:42 PM

ay man, i'm getting rid of kid n8's vote. sorry. he should have voted right. UPPIN 4 honest votes. thanks for voting Murdah...

the kid n8 05-17-09 11:36 AM

fag set up a battle so i can ruin your record! winning little cunt

the kid n8 05-17-09 11:37 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by the kid n8
fag set up a battle so i can ruin your record! winning little cunt


whinning ** cant spell for shit! blah blah blah the message was too short

NoCkTerNuL 05-18-09 03:24 AM

alright i'm setting it up right now... you better drop. i'll set it for a day and half to check in, and half a day to drop.

Da Problem Child 05-18-09 08:24 AM

wow.....out of everybody i didnt think MurDaH187 would vote for me.......shows maturity.....big uppz

Da Problem Child 05-19-09 02:57 PM

uppin............................................. .......

Brydon 05-20-09 12:28 PM

Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

Jesus child dont drop your verse quick or in a hurry coz that was a mess to read and shit.....
Nockternul your verse was kinda poor too but it took it with a couple of ok lines...
Both had sum played ass lines in there too.
Vote:nock

Da Problem Child 05-20-09 02:06 PM

what ever.....................hatin ass person.....

King Solo 06-05-09 05:40 AM

- This battle is closed via the 21-day rule. If you want it re-opened then you can send a private message to myself or another mod to get this re-opened for another week.

King Solo 06-05-09 10:46 PM

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King Solo 06-12-09 09:39 AM

- This battle is now permanently closed.


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