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From The Heart
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200517 ...i key things that are better den your pre-writtens... this is straight from the heart, no premeditated conception a reflection of how GOD's protection shunned me from evil's deception how easily my breath could be rejected and i be a mere memory of life.. how i can so easily conform to the world and seem to Deny Jesus Christ... and now i realize as i type that perhaps readers are questionin my view... Its Clearity Is Showin and It'll be Apparent Once My Typin Is Through.. Perhaps When I Put Finger To Keys I Had A Notion Of Testifying Of Love.. Or Grace or mercy Or Jus Straight Goodness From Above... And Then I Continued With A Line Or Two And Received a Different Approach.. Facin Reproach For My own Sin's how long ago God Shud have, "Cut Da Rope.." But Seeing That I've NEARLY died and WAS CLOSE to seeing Heaven and since those only work for horseshoes i have a purpose i'm guessin.. The Reality Of me is that i'm here with one creation intention... That's To Worship GOD...and Make Sure I Give Him All The Attention For Worthy of All isn't Quite Suitable, its more Like...Giving My All.. Cuz All I Can Give Is What i Was Gave...the height, The basketball The Varsity As Freshman, The Four instruments, the Poetic Gift The Blessing Upon Many Ears With The Songs That I Lift... The Intelligence and The Smarts...The Soul and The Heart... All I Can Give To My GOD is What Was His From The Start.... So When You Read This And Ask Yourself, Why is GOD Tattoed Ova Line afta Line Its To Remind The Readers That Witout Christ You have A Dying Mind ANd Your Ability To Read This Enveloped Message Would Indeed Be Hidin'... ...One Question...Why Does Bein A Servant Of God Need Constant Reminding... Why Is it That When Rappers Begin Flowin They Can Say Oh I Forgot.... To Give God Glory and Remember Not To think I Actually Deserve What i Bought.. But Soon As They Recieve A BET award...They Can't Tell God Thank You Enough... They Fakin..Jus Like They Can Start Prayin Hard Once They Loose All They Stuff.. So For Final Remarks I'm makin a Call to Tru Souljahs Fo Christ Armed With One Sword...Salvation And Life... Only Givin One Shield...and its Made Of Faith... And Realizin They Need Christ EVERY DAY Seeing That he's Not Real, Jus Wen THEY Say.. ...Callin Real Souljahs...Cuz Only Wat u Do For Christ Can Stay... Real...Talk Chuuch Defyned -aka- Savior's Souljah |
Key'd Around 3 in the mournin..I'll drop Some More Links As I UP man..i guess i'll thow shoutouts/dedicate this joint for uhm..Tito Bronsky..Christianite...The Messenger...and all my other souljahs holdin down Romans 1:16 and aint afraid to STAND UP and be counted for GOD's army..figgadeal meh? Chuuch God Bless Defyned -aka- Savior's Souljah -edit-its 3 in da mournin..my spell was..OFF lol but ya kno gotta keep truckin.. :thumbup: |
i loved this piece. good work. i like the idea of it i like the words u used..good vocab..really clear message..this is the best ive seen on RV since i been here..good work..this is a 10..get at me for a collab..do u have aim?
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This Was Some Good Shit Though For Reals Deep Good Vocabulary Here Hope To See More Work Out Of You Nice Keep This Up
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ayo man this was good.....man it was hottt............ayo reflekt...moral...and truth holla at this Open mic man its real and straight from the heart its about my girl and my daughter yo come on holla............
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damn ma u did dat fa sho i like ya whole concept on it keep writing ...vocab, structure, multi'z, evathang was on point ur very creative
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oh yea i forgot rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204043
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yo this shit was tight, felt the emotion like crrazy!....liked it a lot.........structure...vocab....everything was on point fa sho dawg....10/10 deff.!!! rtf on my sig links peace
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I Returned The Feedback On Taz... So I'm Uppin http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202888 ...When I Need To Up Again..I'll Hit UP Payn...then ShoDown... Chuuch Defyned -aka- Savior's Souljah |
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your piece was nice had a hell of a vocab surprised me for real keep up the good work so let me drop this right here dawg
Thunder bold but under control while this cat slumber old With whack rhyme probably be on crack sometime and sold Out this freak clown try keep me down but I ain’t having it clout wrong whereabouts are unknown just a cabinet of bad paperwork your vapor perk weak and squeak like birds I see street nerds that have to repeat words to be heard |
Thanks FOr The Feedback Peoples..But Um...Maddrappa why u always do that foo... i dont care cuz u got madd decent lyrics..but jus wonder Chuuch Defyned -aka- Savior's souljah ps. ima GIRL...;) |
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