D523 vs OneStepBeyond
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 20 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-14-05 at 10:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 10:50 PM.

plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college,
thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish,
doctors scope the situation, but fail to give you enough stitches,
got the premature flow, cause if i get 'touched' i 'BUST' BITCHES,
your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see,
cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me,
your wholes crews hypocrites, casper thinks he the Capitain Thug,
and you said i talk shit and i do, but atleast i can back it up,
wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls,
M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes,
i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s,
cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex...

yeah, im not gonna write anymore cause i don't have the time... personal problems... later

D523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 08:32 PM.

Hi guys, Im One Step Beyond, I think imma good emcee and a hardcore thug
I see my rhymes as dope, but then again i overdose on hallucinogenic drugs

Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch
Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch"

Im sure you can envision how my words hit with precision
My shit will effect you like glaucoma, you'll loose your vision

You can call me a bookie, the way i took bets for me to win against this rookie
Ill have you dismembered, crumbling apart like a soggy cookie

We all look at your lines, and we cant help but laugh humorously
Stupid bitch, you are right, you are One Step Beyond.. stupidity

Ten lines and i merked you, I know you like the shit i spit
So after this battle if you want my verse, ill give you it

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

this was a pretty close battle but i think OSB took this his punchlines were connecting more and felt he had alot better structure and it was nicer to read also good flow both verses were really good but there is only one winner so im'a vote for onestepbeyong return the favour please...

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

meh, thought onestep had the harder punches.....D523, if you are who i think you are, you kinda bit the first two bars....and then the next one you self-glorified....and that took alot away from your verse....and the last part, you werent really aiming disses at your opponent, you were kinda just stating thingss....haha, but, onestep, not that bad, closer was kinda weak, haha, but still, you had the better punches/personals...first bar i lol'd ,haha, so, you get this easily, keep up man, can you rtf in my sig, whenever, its hurting for some votes right now.....word

v/onestepbeyond

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

pretty good battle, was feelin lines on both sides...

onestep, you had good flow, decent meta's n punchz.. really liked tha first 4 lines, tha last 4 lines were alright.. but tha middle 4 were average at best

d523, overall i didn't think yer lines flowed as well and punchz didn't hit as hard...although i did like tha "onestepbeyond..stupidity" line..

overall, i'm gonna go with onestep as i was feelin more of his lines and his verse flowed better imo

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oh...forgot to link in mah battle which is still open after 4 years and 32 days...

vote!!

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

lol damn checkin this shit out...no vote cuz of the rules...only feed lol

favor will be returned soon.. but i swear i've seen those lines before somewhere

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Voted For: D523

dis nigga got it he came harder even tho hiz shit was stretched he had sum aight punches not da best but dey was aight he did have like 1 or 2 personals dat was aight not all dat hot tho he came harder n he put more effort n 2 hiz verse so he gets mah vote 4 dat n he used bigger wordz

osb da fuk u on cuz?ya shit wasnt hot da punches was soft dem personalz was tired as hell ya verse was sloppy get sum sik as punches n fix ya verse den cum holla at him again

vote goes 2 d523

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