+cut vs .snap.+
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aight yo........
you don't even gotta check in, we all kno u'r verse is crap my hands could be covered in pnb but your still the worst snap!!* a purse snatcher, that's the only way you get money text is crummy, less then funny, flows like i intend it's sunny fifteen lines? i could beat you in two-let's not get carried away... have ya lookin down like that dude in your sig u betta call it a day* tryin to knock me out, give me a keg and a couple qualudes see your a newbie, so take this truthfully, you'll .snap. and break loose!! nigga i payed my dues, you just wishin u been noticed... fixin the votings-i'll get all up in your grill-like my dicks in a foreman so just sit and listen, my shit dismisses to clock clowns you so full of it, make like the quick forum box and drop down!!* explanations for morons... *peanut butter/snap...tr snappin with peanut butter on your fingers..lol *dj in his sig is lookin down must have no penis *quick forum box in control panel..u kno peace gl |
Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/
Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/ This newb couldnt fool-me wit a muthafuckin uzie/ Sprayin shit like grass feeder leavin himself in a doozie/ Poor cutastraphe, im spittin a masterpiece, of disaster so-please/ get on ya knees, an' realise i got the keys to your fuckin release/ Your spits~are~hopeless, theses lips strip~your~focus, leaving your body decaying in pits~of~locus/ The closest, you've come ta ferocious doses of rap potions was when ya hocus pocus'd yaself in atrocious lotions/ I bet the record companies hated your style, all it did was bore 'em/ Now you've realised you true dream is to own an internet forum/ Dude, Your Forever 'doomed to text', you'll never -rap on wax-/ And I'm leavin' this cat like Dale Earnhardt, -dead on tracks-!!/ Techinically and tactically proficient when spittin'...illicitly written provisions, testin' this is forbidden/ So sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division..dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition!!/ HoLLa baCk YouNgIn..w00t w00t! |
damn man, nice spit..this'll be good
Good luck man |
yeh u too i felt yours u'r structure kinda changed..but u kept the flow pretty consistent....good luck
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Puches= cutastraphe- more direct, snap didn't hit hard enough
Wordplay=snap- used lots of good words in the same line, cut-ur direct style went against u on this Flow=snap-some of cuts stuff didnt make sense till i'd read the explanation at the bottom, so it messed it up a little Structure=cut-liked the direct style, snap-u mixed it up a little too much Creativity=snap-got too go to snap cuz of the usage of words,it was interesting Vote=snap |
okay, well...my shit was so direct i don't know how you couldn't understand it. anyways uppin for some more votes.
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you don't even gotta check in, we all kno u'r verse is crap
my hands could be covered in pnb but your still the worst snap!!* You mentioned peanut butter, in a rap, shame a purse snatcher, that's the only way you get money text is crummy, less then funny, flows like i intend it's sunny whack fifteen lines? i could beat you in two-let's not get carried away... have ya lookin down like that dude in your sig u betta call it a day* ehh ok tryin to knock me out, give me a keg and a couple qualudes see your a newbie, so take this truthfully, you'll .snap. and break loose!! decent nigga i payed my dues, you just wishin u been noticed... fixin the votings-i'll get all up in your grill-like my dicks in a foreman played, but ok so just sit and listen, my shit dismisses to clock clowns you so full of it, make like the quick forum box and drop down!!* ok closer Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/ Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/ whack and played This newb couldnt fool-me wit a muthafuckin uzie/ Sprayin shit like grass feeder leavin himself in a doozie/ blah..whackness emergency center kid Poor cutastraphe, im spittin a masterpiece, of disaster so-please/ get on ya knees, an' realise i got the keys to your fuckin release/ whack, multis are useless if they aren't part of a good punch/personal Your spits~are~hopeless, theses lips strip~your~focus, leaving your body decaying in pits~of~locus/ The closest, you've come ta ferocious doses of rap potions was when ya hocus pocus'd yaself in atrocious lotions/ I now have a headache. But that was ok. Owwww I bet the record companies hated your style, all it did was bore 'em/ Now you've realised you true dream is to own an internet forum/ whack Dude, Your Forever 'doomed to text', you'll never -rap on wax-/ And I'm leavin' this cat like Dale Earnhardt, -dead on tracks-!!/ played and whack Techinically and tactically proficient when spittin'...illicitly written provisions, testin' this is forbidden/ So sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division..dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition!!/ played, stretched, and a weak punch Cutastraphe takes this battle. He had a ok verse, some good punches and personals in there. .snap. came with a weak verse, played lines and such. snap lose the multis until you can make them into witty metas/personals/ounches cause they are worthless on their own. Vote Cut Please drop an honest vote here guys. please READ the verses, having a prob with that lately http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157 |
Punches-snap
Flo-snap Multies-snap Metaphors-snap Closure-snap Personals-cut Vote- Snap Man U Got Mad Propz On That M&m Line Damn!!!!!!! Hit This Up: Alyssa Rap In Astar: She Fought Cuz Natalie Wanted To Fight Kyle And Alyssa's Lil Ass Whooped Natalies Ass Threw Her Head Into The Locker And Started Punchin The Shit Out Of Her |
FUCK MY SISTER COPY N PASTED OFF HER A.I.M. SHIT AND PUT IT ON PASTE INSTEAD OF THE LINK BUT HERE IT GOES
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056 |
aight this shit is getting slept on...
i thought it was a pretty good battle can we get some more honest votes, ann we'll hit up any links, if snap don't i'll twist his neck and pop his head off like a bottlecap...aight!! |
Yo, i'd hit up your threads, but I'm a newbie...cant poll vote..im more than willing to vote and give my input, but most people sont like it when you vote if u cant poll vote too...
Thanks for your votes w00t~ |
snap giving your opinion is better then not giving it..you feel me? when i couldnt poll vote..i still voted regularly..i gave my opinion cuz i don't give ashit bout a poll...it's not like poll votes are a pasttime or anything...lol
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This line was very clever and if i could vote i definitely would vote for snap. i liked the Jr. line too. |
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