do you?
verse 1
theres something inside in me thats gon pull beneath the surface i'm resuming confusing i'm afraid it might go to far to a point where i got no fuckin choice its creepy and i'm sleepy its like self consious that i can not fuckin control and might lose reacting is distracting theres comfort in you but even in 1000 chances in me never i'm insecure and and no cure yo i'm so dark hearted and lookin through the mutha fuckin window imaginin your there but why the fuck should i care you dont even notice me and totally ignore me the darkness is holdin me to tightly and cant get loose i may get loose but really im never fuckin loose you the light and i'm the mutha fuckin switch cant you see that i luv you and dont think your a bitch i cant see it right through you why cant you do the same you can see right through me but cant you not do the same i'm so sick and tired of asking myself the same question its gon get to a fuckin point to where you gon get obstruction your the one whos haunting me and your not goin away all day you stay in me and dont go away but theres a part i do like that i'm a mutha fuckin memory i dont wanna be mutha fuckin enemy and afraid of me you can trust me and not fear me to where i stalk you mutha fuckas that call me a stalker i'm gonna sock you i cant find myself and i'm losen more and i know you have it you have all the pieces of me and i'm a puzzle that needs fixin i look in the mirror and see and hate my own reflection its ditraction cuz i went in the fuckin wrong direction so i have you in me and dont want you to leave chorus x2 do you luv me like i luv you do you need me like i need you do you want me like i want you i dont hate you do you hate me girl your bueaty is makin me shAKY |
this song is yet again about idyllic queen i'm no fuckin stalker
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damn alot of emotions involved in on this song..i thought u meant audio song when u told me to peep but chorus could be better and longer and i cant knock the verse as a whole since your emotions were stirred tightly into this piece..but a little bit of advice..
any broad online shouldnt make this much of a difference to you ..trust me..not worth it..find a girl from school or in your neighborhood to write a song about ..write a song bout ya moms u know?? BUT one again it was decent.. rhyme fell off some parts but the content of it is what is most important and u displayed a character of sensitivity.. |
Your flows cool
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i'm sensittive.
i tell you all now cuz i went through a lot of drama when i was small. i never even knew my real mom |
thanx for the feed back and advice idh
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thanx done
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Yo flow was tight...Just to much personality about your life so just write about someone you know!!! Not someone on here this website.Aight!
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thanx crazed shy
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yo ppl leave some feed back
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this was wack nuff said
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nigga virtue mad cuz we aint wit him i see dat y u bitchin especially 2 me ive seen da thread u bitch n e ways good frop nigga i feel ya holla back homie B.A.M 4 life fuck these hatin niggaz peace out n 1 luv
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thanx raw killa fuck you virtue
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