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I Dont Wanna Rap Witcha ft. Yvonne
yea i was gonna do some more wit this track but decided to just go ahead n post it up anyway.
hook- tony b 1st verse-tony b 2nd verse- yvonne 3rd verse- tony b and yvonne beat- hysteriabeats i'll have the links up soon, so don't close this.
leave links as well, i'll def rtf btw, the 3rd verse will most likely be redone on yvonne's part whenever she gets the time
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^um...wow i wasnt expecting this!
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aiight RTF.....
lol intro was 50? hook is dope tho. I liked the chopped screwed shit... damn tony you elevated a lot yo.. this shit is pretty nice. quality got way better. up vocals a tad bit. Cuz I gotta strain to hear you, i can hear all you tho. Like the flow changes. ain't bo OH SHIT type line, but lyrics still all good on point. But this hook is pretty dope... your adlibs made it good..... like how you came real hype this time, while your first verse was kinda laid back. flow fell off in one part, but got back on track. overall man, you ripped this track pretty much man. but damn, you def upped your game A LOT since last time I peeped you. holla @ me for a collab whenever nucca. EZ |
hook - is strate for what it is especially fits da concept of track well
1st Verse - Shit is nice ya flow is nice real on beat........ya swagga is nice real cocky feelin it....but i feel that u could delivered it wit more energy..... Hook - same as above 2nd Verse - flow is on point.......lyrics is strate but ya gotta up ya energy u sound to laidback for a track like this.....but ya lyrics is nice..... Hook - same as above 3rd Verse - yea here we go this is da emotion i'm talkin bout......real cocky swagger man..../ Yvonne - yea yall both stepped up da energy.....nice.... Overall - dope beat.......nice lyrics...up yall emotion and it'd be dope..... pz ~1~ |
I think u have a good energy, decent flow, that could evolve into something better, so keep with what you're doing, and keep getting nice and staying nice.
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thanx for the feed everyone, n yea spul i'll def get at u
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never listened to tony b before
intro was kinda funny. sounded like cedric the entertainer from kanyes first cd. beat is cool. hook sounds boring. not into that chopped and screwed tony b - ayo this is cool. never heard of you before but it sounds pretty good. lyrics are cool. flow is on point. voice matches the beat. you sound like someone but i cant figure out who it is. quality is cool. yvonne - i like that style you got..kinda sounds like you whispering. your quality falls off when you get too loud. maybe thats why you rap like that. lyrics are cool. maybe get into the track a little more though. at time u sound a little boring. verse 3 - you say "haters" too much. haha. lyric are okay. oh SWITCH!!! haha. beat dont like it. shoulda stuck with that other beat. or maybe you coulda switched spots. cause tony has a little more energy so it woulda sounded better. overall this is a cool track. good job tony and yvonne |
great beat selection (Hysteria is mad nice)
hook works well with the song, and the swag is right Verse one, solid energy while being laid back. odd combo to b both, but very nice Verse 2, i dont like either ur voice or ur energy. flow works fairly well, tho not as tight as first verse Verse 3, dont say haters so much. flow works well. switch is out of left field...dont like it. Decent track overall. nice work |
okay..thanx
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k this beat is cool first verse is coo the lyrics is str8 gud verse doggie...hook is coo i like the shit.....yvoeee u needa lower ur highs in this nice verse tho lyrics n delivery is coo...when u went wit the oHHH sounds like it clipped...verse three is cool nice flow n shit overall gud job wow i didnt know yvonee was on the last verse 2 i liked this flow better gud shit
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lol ppl used to say i said 'nigga' too much n i wouldn't ever get on the radio cussin so much so now i say shit like fakas n hatas instead lmao
thanx for the feed everyone. dont forget to leave links |
bump this, it's hot trust
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^what the flying fuck @ ur name!
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(i dont wanna rap witcha). i dont like the beat. verse 1 is nice. sounds very natural. flow is nice, til one point in the end, u get a word off. verse 2 is iiite. lyrics are nice, flows on. it sounds too plain in my opinion. but still nice. verse 3 is about the same as verse one. good shit :thumbup:
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