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..::Thats real::.. Fuck what you thought!!
pm me when you have youre 2 feedback links and ill reopen thisbtw ive warned you b4 i dont think youve ever posted links and ive told you b4 idc if you told me youve left feed i dont have time to check into everyone;s story youll be banned from the audio forum
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alright i'm peepin this out
your quality has gotten better...... your vocals are too low i can barely hear you your delivery is good..you gotta work on your emotion flow is str8.....beats pretty tight It sounds perfect 4 this track Good stuff.......... overall decent track 1 |
Aiight...
Up the volume of your vocals, not too much, just make em more clear and shit...... Qualitys much better than the last shit I heard of yours...Beats not bad, I cant really understand much of the lyrics cause of the volume though......... Delivery sounds like it could be a touch better, track also would of benefitted from some scratchin at the end... And thats about it man, not really a hit single, but its deffo not a bad song... Good shit... |
whoa... much better quality than last track I listened to...
Feeling the beat... something I would spit on... Lyrics are tight... your flows tight... the accent is cool on it... not use to that... it's tight... I'm not good with dropping feed on audio... so... overall, tight track... and I'm going to finish listening now lol |
ight im peepin this shit
the beat is dope it be sumthin i'd spit to the flow is ight u got that fast kinda flow lyrics are ight nuthin special but they good i could nod my head to this fo sho this aint the most special track i ever heard but it isnt bad at all id give this a 7.5/10 keep flowing homie |
barely could hear you but its dope man i like the beat.....if really listened and hear well your flow of things is real good!
your lyrics are good too man nice shit!...... |
Intro nice setup. the voice could use some timbre in a bad way, just EQ the lows and mids, don't fucks with the volume!! flow is on though I can barely make out the lyrics at times, not that it's not clear, just hard to discern. Chorus is cool, second verse comes in and then it hit me, this person's voice is hella whispy and breath-y. the second and third verses deliver exactly liek the first, so there's not much to sayabout em that I haven't already. The beat's cool, personally I would have thickened it to get more bass in it and make it stand out a little. outro was cool, served its purpose.
good track that needs some finessing on the mixing to make it more immersive. real talk as always. uno |
Like that beat...I know the sample thats used...very soulfull..Ur flow matches it nicely or should I say compliments it well...If mixed right could be really a nice underground edition...clear ur vocals a bit more...Nice track.
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aight RTF'ing here...intro was ok but i'm pretty much wit everyone on the upping your vocals...flows good ya kicked in ok...beats nice...laid back type ish...2nd verse kickin now delivery is good flows decent....lyrics are hard to hear...emotion is ok...seems a tad forced...but i unno if thats how you jus deliver it....
overall: ye it was ok if ima be honest i wouldn't personally bump it...vocal volume let it down but the beats nice flows there...reminds me of some Death Row type beat...ye it's good...keep droppin and advice for next track would be to work on the EQ a bit more :thumbup: |
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yo.. hook me up with the lo-fi link
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Thats real
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3943400&q=lo hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3943400&q=hi |
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