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Ft. KroniX - The Word Today
§ªyK®iÐЙ Ft. KroniX - The World Today.
Verse One - §ªyK®iÐЙ Whats up with the world today, people fighting, new baby born everyday// Rockets being shot from country to country, new wars starting in every century// An innocent child being attacked as we speak, or being molestered by an old freak// Gangs killing becuase of race, jus cuz he was black he was kicked in the face// lets stop all problems today, and stop the gangs like the KKK// lets stop gangs and lets all live together, stop drugs and take em away for ever// why kill people if they aint done nothing, lets catch the killers and do something// Chorus this world is not game 4 all of us 2 play we all got a life, we all should have something to say we shouldnt get hustled and have to pay look how the world is today Verse Two - KroniX babies yawlin, women crying, men falling, all dis fightin is apalling// from north america down to the middle east,fightin for rights when will there b peace wot is goin wrong in this world today, no respect, no love, peoples hearts av been turned away// in the streets today small kids smoke greens and vandalise, it needs to be stopped one day they will realise// the regulations are forgotten people need to b stopp'en, bring this society 2 a peaceful place not rotten// george bush n tony blair optin 4 war,do they care, leavin people n property,destroyed in depsair'// binladen n hussein leading ppl 2 rong fings in life, destruction n terror they shud be put under knife'// solve the problems wot is the world cumin to, between the richest n poorest no luv is cumin thru// Verse Three - §ªyK®iÐЙ some countrys aint got the death penalty, maybe they should and we should have more felony// 50 stopin muggers from mugging, why bounce around and try to be thugging, when alot people mug to get something// people live in the streets and rob to live, gangs making poeple rob and give// little wannabees bouncin around thinkin there gangsters, why tho?, just act like ya self not like wankster// whats the need of using guns if you got a fist, most yall wannabees and when they shoot they will miss// the goverment aint strong enuff to stop war, they cant even stop prostitutes from being the town hoar// why attack old people for money, wen u jump people and u find it funny, why rape ur wife and ur excuse is sayin shes ya honey bunny// people flyin in planes and commititin sucide for the leader, no more I.R.A no more al'queda// stop all the terrorism and kamakazie pilots, fightin is not the answer so stop riots// end all this now and rightaway, look how the world has changed today// Chorus this world is not game 4 all of us 2 play we all got a life, we all should have something to say we shouldnt get hustled and have to pay look how the world is today |
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thought the topic was a bit played....seen it done many times before...and i gotta say better executed.....i think both need to work on flow...structure doesnt matter....and work on the multis....could see you tried to g et your feelings across..but, needs quite alot of work i think.....add more extensive vocab..it will help....but....not bad....jus keep workin on it...pZ
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Thanks, I rarely do open mics i just battle often, i know its played but i tryied it :) people copyed me with the topic and blah its played lol,
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babies yawlin, women crying, men falling, all dis fightin is apalling//
from north america down to the middle east,fightin for rights when will there b peace wot is goin wrong in this world today, no respect, no love, peoples hearts av been turned away// in the streets today small kids smoke greens and vandalise, it needs to be stopped one day they will realise// the regulations are forgotten people need to b stopp'en, bring this society 2 a peaceful place not rotten// george bush n tony blair optin 4 war,do they care, leavin people n property,destroyed in depsair'// Some good realism here... 50 stopin muggers from mugging, why bounce around and try to be thugging, when alot people mug to get something// people live in the streets and rob to live, gangs making poeple rob and give// little wannabees bouncin around thinkin there gangsters, why tho?, just act like ya self not like wankster// whats the need of using guns if you got a fist, most yall wannabees and when they shoot they will miss// the goverment aint strong enuff to stop war, they cant even stop prostitutes from being the town hoar// This verse was kinda simplisitc..decent at best Overall: 6.5/10 it wasnt a bad collab at all kronik came real good in the beginning but you guys sorta fell off in the end...good work but a little elevation needed |
I can't understand your name.
Letters, normal ones, are cool. |
^Thats werd..
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^lol it says Saykridd which is Sacred lol..
This was alright though i thought...structure threw off the flow a bit with the stretched out lines...should try to work on using more multies like Deva said...your vocab in this was ok though, it could be up'd i thought....but overall this was alright....keep at it. |
sounded to me like that song 'where is the love' by the black eyed peas..played topic, although you could have took it to a new level had you took your own turn on it..it had little emotion and flow was off
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Iight thanx.. Like i sed im more of a battle emcee..
SayKriDD is wa my name sez I wuz SayKriD ]1[ |
..the wat you started your flow reminded me alot of 'Em' than it kind of changed in to 'Where's the Love?'..it is a played out topic..but you can never go wrong with 'Peace'..so therefore..a decent drop..
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