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MarvJay1009 vs OneStepBeyond
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-18-05 at 11:59 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
whut da fukk is 6 lines??????....lol datz all u got
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who cares... just battle.... you just rap gangsta anyway
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i rap gangsta lol... u gotta be white
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 12:21 AM.
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And so? what if i am? You gotta be black in that case...
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OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 12:37 AM.
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^What a fag. Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream, The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,* You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe, What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS, Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv, Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...** *Closest thing to makin up/changin his real background information about him is switchin desk themes... as in the background of your computer... **He said Mom jokes weren't played... Ain't even try... |
onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth.
dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self. ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak. you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'. i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey. O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay. 1st bar-click da link its a thread of him dissin himself lastbar-O.G is his crew...u'll get it |
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
not even worth voting....marv...you got owned...talked it and couldn't walk it....i'd vote on this but i'm sure OSB will get more tha enough voyes....this shyt is a wrap
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MarvJay1009: K, you had a decent verse, you didn't have any played lines which is good. Punches were hard hitting and landed home. Nice metaphors and dope set ups for the following line. Fav bar: ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak. you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'. Overall, 65%. OneStepBeyond: K, you had a alright verse, you said you didn't try...& it showed sadly :(. Your punches were witty, but not as hard as Marv's. Plus, momma jokes are played and yes, i did see what you tryed to do...But you puleld it off horribly. So that put you at a disadvantage. Fav bar: You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe, What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS, Overall, 50%. So v/Marv. He just dropped harder than OneStepBeyond. No hate. Please rtf on one of the battles in my sig Marv. |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
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