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A1C .vs. Frein-Ma$ter
 ^4 votes...and maybe youll be as ill as him^
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Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me
Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin & made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch? We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery Blah 12 lines match it |
k heres my spit......
yo, yo, I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE. My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE. A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR, Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS. Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews', I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS.. Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE, Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE. Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT, Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!.. murked......... UPPPPIN fo votes now..... |
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Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me
Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week nah Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin & made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin meh But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch? We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit meh So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job no Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick kay I guess Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery blah I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE. My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE. no A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR, Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS. nice try Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews', I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS.. no way Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE, Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE. nah Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT, Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!.. no Vote A13 for having one not compltely whack line |
Both came pretty wack, but A1C came less wack.
Vote - A1C |
ur both herbs and dont know wat wordplay is ......and next time kid expplain ur vote.........
uppppin and if u dont know wat wordplay is or juust a stupid kid .....dont vote |
A1C:
Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week ehh...decent personal i guess... Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin & made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin ehh... But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch? We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit no So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job lol...aight... Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick blah... Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery that's true about the lottery...decent closer... frein-ma$ter: I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE. My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE. meh... A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR, Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS. ehh...prolly coulda been worded better... Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews', I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS.. lol...okay Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE, Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE. meh... Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT, Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!.. okay...but meh as a closer... i thought this battle was real close...this shit was tough to vote on... A1C definitely had the personals here, but i think frein had a slight edge on punches cuz the concepts behind 'em were less common...both had multis, but frein had more...other than that, they were about even...overall, like i said, it was close...but, V/ frein...i thought he had the slight edge over A1C here...good battle... |
k its 1-1 since other guy didnt explain his vote.........
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vote: Frien
yo nice flow through out....... a lot of multis and laughable punches..... this was a hard battle to call..... but frein edged this one out with multies, cuz everything else was pretty much a tie as far as punches go.... ill shit yall |
Not a great battle but my vote is for Fren.
He gives an attempt to throw harder punches, and a little wordplay. Also he tried using some metas here and there. Most of it doesnt hit hard but its a tad step up from A's verse. Its a win by only a slim margin tho, becuz lines like this: Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE. are not hardhitting at all. vote fren |
v/ a1c
frein had nothing but wordplay. . an i'd seen all but one or two of them before. . a1c or w/e his name is had one or two more original lines. |
frein sort ya structure out. whats-with-spittin-LIKE-THIS?
anyway, a1c A1C: Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week ehh, decent enough personal... Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin & made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin nope... But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch? We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit blah... So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job nice punch, i guess... Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick nah, not feelin it... Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery Ok...nice closer. Frein-Master frein-ma$ter: I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE. My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE. blah.. A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR, Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS. Ok...decent Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews', I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS.. your best bar Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE, Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE. nope... Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT, Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!.. blah...bad closer, wasn't strong enough. Ok, close battle but i think A13 edge'd this just. first off, frein ya structure wasn't great. Whats with all the caps and dashes. If ya have good multies ya don't need 'em. A had a couple of nice lines wheras frein all i could see from u was the bad news one, that wern't great neither. a wins with a better structure and a few "nice" punches. v/ A13 |
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