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Razer 03-16-04 01:48 PM

....Just Another Day
 
I woke up feeling fucked like i do every morning,
Yawning, hearing my mum downstairs calling,
I got fully dressed then turned on my computer,
Entered my mums password and logged on with her user,
Feeling like a loser, i checked my Yahoo! emails,
And as i suspected, they were all from desperate females,
So i logged off, and quickly ran downstairs,
Looking for my breakfast, but there was knowone down there,
So i took 3 pounds from my mums handbag,
And left without saying goodbye, just like my fucking grandad,
Got on my half broken bike, without an ounce of hype,
And riding whilst spitting like i was on open mic,
I got to school quickly, and locked my bike quickly,
Ran into my first class, too see my teacher tryna hit me,
I hit him back with the first thing that i could find,
The sharp pencil in my pocket is what came to mind,
I took it out and stabbed his chest in the same place 5 times,
Made him swallow the led, and left his face with 5 lines,
The whole class just sat at there chairs staring,
Laughing out loud, slightly proud that there not caring,
I ran back out and hid in a tree For 6 Hours,
Until i got bored when the rain poured showers,
I went home, to see my mother with a policeman,
She looked at me and said "Come here please son",
I walked over, my hands couldnt stop shaking,
The silence wasnt breaking, The police had me for the taking,
My mum said that she loved me, whilst the policeman handcuffed me,
Chucked me in his his car, and started to fully cuss me,
All the way to the station, he kept on saying cusses,
Like "Your mums so big, she rollerskates on busses",
He then took me to a cell searched me, Punched and hurt me,
While i thought if i could ever escape this journey,
I fell asleep in the cell, with 1 of my arms broken,
Woke up in silence, i heard no words spoken,
I felt fine, with no need to scream,
Then i soon realised that the day was just a dream.

Yo i just done this open mic for fun coz i woz bored, so no hate if you dont like this.

PE@CE

MC SKINNY 03-16-04 03:02 PM

U reckon ur black u reckon ur all tht ur the 1 who got fucked by a black man and his cat/
I heard about ur mum she is black she likes it in the sack rite below the bottom rack/ heard u all like to lick,ur own dick
tht is wot i head from a gal wiv a big prick/
wtf ur calling me gay ur the 1 who fucks ur dad everyday/
i will rap u so slowly intil ur balls start to drop.. cmon stay wiv me or ur balls will drop/
i heard ur dad is quite weird he likes to stick his dick inside a dip dap/
cmon dont cry ur lyrics r shit and ur starting to look shy/
u try to mc me 9 words for u get bent u like it up the air vent/
i am getting tired of this stiff shit so c u later and try and try to a get prick

Razer 03-16-04 03:12 PM

.....is This Faggot Trying To Cuss Me Or Suttin? You Faggot. Youve Only Made 3 Posts And Now Your Acting Like Your Great - Get A Life Pussio.

Razer 03-16-04 03:12 PM

Oh and by the way you skinny prick...your lyrics were shit!

Razer 03-18-04 09:45 AM

Any Feedback?

Pe@ce

SPuLâ„¢ 03-18-04 09:53 AM

That was nice, man. I'm feelin' that. Good flowin' and use of words and shit like that. nice stuff. Keep droppin'

DirtBoy69 03-18-04 10:22 AM

straight flow threw the entire piece, nothing special in the volcab department but it gets the job done here, nice story it wass kinda funny in spots overall 7/10 get droppin and nice battle verse agaisnt me too

Razer 03-18-04 03:15 PM

^^Thanx. Yea Good Battle Man^^

Gambino 03-18-04 07:00 PM

I thought that the verse was hat yo! peice cuzo

Razer 03-19-04 03:40 AM

^^Safe blud

Pe@ce


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