MetEoR-K vs Gutter Shad
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 02-04-05 at 07:28 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MetEoR-K has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 07:29 PM.

Gutter Shad has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 07:32 PM.

Can't find you on the block ah get ya while you sleeping in bed.
Drown you under water and literally give you swimming of the head.
You sell cookies and nigga I stay on the grind.
Hit you while we battling now thats a punch line.
And don't talk to me nigga if you see me on the block.
Albums aint selling shit just like movies by The Rock.
I'm sorry to Toni Braxton but I'm breaking your heart.
Fuck that I'm ah snatch it out a rip it apart.
Love me or hate me man I gotta be the best.
Cut your thumb off and use it as a queen in chest.
This nigga is like a roach so I'm grabbing the raid.
You's a kid in this game and you just got play'd. (Kid n Play)

I put the fear right into this wack rapper Gutter Shad
Leave em scared where he stands so he stutters man
Even if you were Jesus you wouldn't have balls to face me
You stupid, like a clown everything you say is crazy
Also why you accept a battle to a rapper from Michigan
You pray every night you win once, just keep wishin it
Your skills are about as good as you bowl, always in the gutter
Why don't you just find a gay guy, it'll be your only lover
I'll add another loss to your record, you about to whine?
Get down on the floor punk, I ready to get my shoes shined
You ain't gangsta, you wouldn't take milk from a lunch cart
Now quit rap dude, and go back to the damn Junk Yard

iight good job can we get some votes!

Good luck bro, uppin for votes.......................

Voted For: Gutter Shad

Meteor-K
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. you attempted wordplay, but either it was just played, or just fucking wack.. or both.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Gutter Shad
structure is a little inconsistent.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Meteor-K had the better structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis and personals.. Gutter Shad had better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Gutter Shad gets my vote..

VOTE - GUTTER SHAD

Voted For: MetEoR-K

Good Battle But Im Goin With Meteor On This One.His Verse Had The Better Punches And Personals.Gutter Got Off Topic A Lil Bit And Started On Nonsense.Nothin Strong Coming From His Verse.Both Need A Lil Work But Good Battle

Voted For: MetEoR-K

ok strutures and vocab was even its as if all noobs are the same now anyways gutter your punches were mad played especially the tony line that was just super extra wack there shit was corny as fuck and mad played so want the kid and play line played and wack meteor you had creative punches that hit pretty decent they werent great but you managed to stun your oppenant with superior creativity and punches that struck him while he threw weak bitch slaps in his verse your metaphores need work but they also overshadowed him just word ya shit a lil better and youll be dope

Uppin, let's get some more votes in people =) .....

Voted For: MetEoR-K

i voted for meteor, cus i feel he actually has potential to elevate, and be dope. if he stays active. that verse was nice, but i think u should practice more, and come up with more creativitie so u can become a dope head. i have a feelin abotu u...u came harder in this one with punches, and personals...but u werent consistent. u gota coem hard from start to finish, and u didnt do that...but i was feelin ur all around verse, and structure...
gutta-u had a nice verse. he did come wit it tho, u gota admit. that guta/bowlin line was a good personal, and creative. u also came hard in ur verse, but i think ur punches werent that hard. i think u shouldve came harder in that...but its all good. u were creative, i just wasnt feelin it, and i dont think u came that hard...
overall-this was a aight battle...yall came hard in some areas, but i still think yall should elevate more...

plz return tha favor on battle links in sig, cause i took tha time out to vote on this. and plz make it xplained, cause i explained this one...and no d/r, but im sure yall wont do that..meteor, good shit..and check out NOK...link in my sig, drop a tryout for tha crew man....




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Voted For: MetEoR-K

MEteor gets this battle... meteor's flow was a lot better than gutter. gutters wasnt horrible, but it was kinda choppy at points like the first line... that was hard to follow. Meteor had some ok punches too like the milk cart line. that was pretty funny. there were really no metaphors in this battle so i couldnt pick anybody in that section. meteor's verse pulled ahead because he actually had some personals.. he had the junk yard one at the end and the personal about gutter balls in bowling>> personals are always a good touch to a verse... gutter's verse kinda lacked because none of his lines were hard. they coulda been better if he reworded some of em- like the rock line... that woulda be harder hittin wit some better wording. overall, shad's verse was pretty plain and dull. his lines were kinda played and since meteor came wit the personals and mediocre punches, he takes away the win...
Vote: Meteor k