wogzta & FormulaMC - Origins Of The Two
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Where Did We Go To And Go Through? What Did We Encounter And Conquer? Mounted The Top-Of, This Divide And Split It For Two Lyrical Monsters Wogzta, Formula, Ready To Lead Into The Future With Out Of This World Teachings Seeing Is Believing, And You See It, So Believe It's A New Beginning... [verse 1 - FormulaMC] I Ride The Beat On The Tables, Thread The Needle Want To Disrupt The Rap Game, Like Yoko Did The Beatles But In An Instant, Shit Shifts And Change Is More Than Sporadic Like A Crack Addict On The Streets, You Can't Break The Habits You Can Make A Balance, But Other Shit Will Often Be Placed In Your Way N Soon To Me, It'll Be A Coffin I See Cough Then I Bleed, I Give It All On The Mic, No Other Choice But When I Talk, I'm Mimed, On The Corner With A Guitar But No Voice Poor, Case Open Hoping For Spare Dollars To Be Thrown In I Coulda Been Ill, But Past Drug Problems Has Dope Sewn In Lookin' At Pops, We Both Grown Men, It's Time For Me To Leave The Nest Time For Me Relieve All The Stress, I Believe This Is The Test Can I Pull Through ? And Finally See A Brighter Horizon ? Or Will My Mind Play Tricks On Me N Make The Sun Disguised N Dressed As The Moon, Not Surprising, Happier Days Have Vanished Frantic, I Pushed Panic But The Damn Cancer Had Me Satanic It Was Fuck Everyone, Live For Me, I Thought I'd Survive But Who Pulled The Plug On Rap's Respirator ? The Music's Not Alive And By Five, We Had The Four, The Score Hit Three, Down To Two. . Wogzta N Formula, Tall Standing, Demanding To Teach The Few [chorus] [interlude - wogzta] To understand the whole story... You must go back to the beginning... [verse 2 - wogzta] In the 7th Circle of Emcee Hell, an alliance was formed A crew lead by two demon kings where defiance was scorned Through volcanic rhymes and explosive preachin' they gathered minions And built an army with which they would shatter billions Of inferior creatures, who believed puppets could kill Until they stood before The Two, engulfed in an eruption of skill Their strings were cut and their show was over with no encore Enemies had no use left, put aside like the over-flown Concorde Death came so swiftly, the duo became known as the "Instants" Without moving a limb they could make you weaker than the bone of an infant But this was Hell, not Heaven and dissention came to the team They started to fall apart faster than the Nazi Regime Some of the minions wanted to appeal to the masses So they began actin' like Angels and shipped of skill in a basket Heaven opened its doors, and the traitors strayed off course But there were too many of them to be takin' back by force So the fools prospered, and began to believe they were dope The few that remained loyal to the roots were in need of some hope Creepin' up slow, we're ready to revive the dominance of our crew And explain the ancient origins of The Two... [chorus] |
uppin...... lets get some honest feedback please......
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aiight this was sum ill ass shyt rite here....both of u did ur thing and it came out really good, it had vocab, multis,personals,and nice wordplay, the only thing i would suggest is to change the title to sumthing more eye catchin so u can get more feedback...besdies dat nice drop on both of ur sides......
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Upppppppp, leave links.
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I read this earlier and I don't know why I didn't reply?...anywho...I was liking this you guys came very strong with multis(this was full of'em),wogzta i only read few pieces of yours and I'm impressed and Formula..I think you are coming up..moving on up~~~~my sig~~Click~Click~~~
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wow mass props on this....it was almost fire stuf....damn nice imagery and just ill...i was feelin this a lot..stay up guys....
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^ aight thanks for all the nice feedback.... upping.....
ps. penskills, i'll check your link |
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Up,leave links.
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Want To Disrupt The Rap Game, Like Yoko Did The Beatles
^^Form,,, this was def the best line in the collab... tight... i thought you both came strong with this.... some nice wordplay and good syllable count,, got a nice flow going, both were pretty well matched for a collab, sometimes their too different to really go, but these went good.... nice work.... you make a good team... i'll be looking for the next....... |
^ thanks for the nice words about the collab..... upping
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Pretty Good in my Opinion. Both had Flow.
You Guys Had a Different Ryme Scheme Tho For the Same Song or Wuteva Tho. I like your Multies in Some Lines. And Formula's Meta's. Wogzta I thought Your Verse was Worded Pretty Good. Bringing Back History And shit. Blah. Nice over-all Verses. Keep this Up. Get at Me. Peep this Battle if you Bored. Aight. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114862 Here's My Open Mic Too. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114861 |
^ right... thanks for the honest feedback, its heaps appreciated... peace
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