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os1ris vs Invektive
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-13-05 at 10:08 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 10:02 PM.
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Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 10:07 PM.
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your flows are opposite of hard shit...every word you spit's not far from tarnished your not underrated ......just accept the simple fact that your lyrics are garbage he part of the grand hustlas...AKA the worst crew to grace the flesh of the site when your stepping from the front of it.......is the only time you blessin the mic id be emberassed........if my rhymes came half as weak as yours come dude good job......your open mic got 2 replies......and one of them were from you i can actually agree with you one one thing....half this site think they tight their minds are obviously mislead...cause they all sound like YOU when they write |
Invektive only thinks he’s sick, delusional, cause he was born-mental/
You’re done, ya “blows” delivered too late, like overdue porn-rentals// Battlin nobodies your claim to fame you suck, so be glad you met ya match/ Only established in ya sig, you winnin this is like hand amputees playin catch// Like your avatar your originality is generic, my punches always land the hardest/ Invektive...must be ambidextrous, cause on the other hand yur garbage// So what you been herbin geeks, you won 8 now thats absurd to me/ Treat his verse like tha jets kicker... cause that’s where you deserve to be//* * this guy made a whole verse about fuck the jets kicker blah |
up.....nice drop.........................................
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Voted For: Invektive
Inektive Alright nice Flow Man Came Pretty Hard, Decent Punches, Creative, That's What Wins Battles, Vocabulary Was There And It Was Decent Structure Could Use Some Work Hommie Like Ditch Them Dots And Stuff, And You'll Be Cool, Also Personals, Nice Personals Man, Creative As Well.....8.5/10 Osiris Alright Fam You Had Some Good Punches But Your Vocabulary And Structure Made You Go Down Try And Put SOme Better Vocabulary, Read more Battles, Also Don't Use The "/" It Make's Your Verse Look Sloppy, Try To Line Your Bars Up Stright, Also Add Some Personals To Your Verse, OverAll Invek Got This Battle With harder Punches Better Vocabulary And Structure, Not To Mention Personals Vote=InvReturn The Favo, Link In My Sig Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed |
word ^^^^^^uppin for more votes.........................
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^^^aint that a crew vote right therre????????????????????????
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This was feedback posted for Invektive
Checking the pizzolllls............................
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uppin......os1ris you should try out for the Establishment............think about it
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Voted For: Invektive
invektive all the way... os1ris nvektive only thinks he’s sick, delusional, cause he was born-mental/ You’re done, ya “blows” delivered too late, like overdue porn-rentals// -nice first line, but second line, i dunno, porn rentals, meh?...5/10 Battlin nobodies your claim to fame you suck, so be glad you met ya match/ Only established in ya sig, you winnin this is like hand amputees playin catch// -too over played this line is....5/10 Like your avatar your originality is generic, my punches always land the hardest/ Invektive...must be ambidextrous, cause on the other hand yur garbage// -i dunno, good effort, but second line coulda been worded a lil better 6/10 So what you been herbin geeks, you won 8 now thats absurd to me/ Treat his verse like tha jets kicker... cause that’s where you deserve to be// -not bad personal, 7/10 overall: 23/40....not bad, good attempt on the vocab, little weak on the deliverly of your punches and personal, needed to be worded a little better, structure was decent, flow a little rough in some spots, not much complexity, alright drop, elevate invektive your flows are opposite of hard shit...every word you spit's not far from tarnished your not underrated ......just accept the simple fact that your lyrics are garbage -solid opener, link in there and everythin 7/10 he part of the grand hustlas...AKA the worst crew to grace the flesh of the site when your stepping from the front of it.......is the only time you blessin the mic -little choppy on the second line, but good punch 7/10 d be emberassed........if my rhymes came half as weak as yours come dude good job......your open mic got 2 replies......and one of them were from you -nice personal, made me laugh....8/10 i can actually agree with you one one thing....half this site think they tight their minds are obviously mislead...cause they all sound like YOU when they write -meh, okay, a little stringy, but decent closer 7/10 overall: 29/40....solid drop, read better from you, but not to insult, just not your best...good vocab, originality, personals and punches came harder and did more than opponents, nice flow and structure....little weak on the closer just touch em up a little and your good.....no multis thou eh...maybe next time.... vote: Invektive....(sure do love the links eh...haha) |
^^^ thanks for honesty in your vote.......uppin for more votes...
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Uppin this yea Invektive sorry bro jus got in this crew even though you said we suck lol dont worry we just trying to breathrough here in rv ya feel me good verse by the way..
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yea i feel you but some of those crews dont last long at all....so if it falls through....try out for the establishment man.....and oh yea...sorry bout that crew vote.... didnt know that cat was in my crew or i woulda said something....uppin
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