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Dope Name 02-08-04 12:40 AM

Zikio version 2
 
We got the rules set up

10-12 lines
normal rules
you spit first

I'll wait for you to spit and then i will

alright I'll be waiting

zikio version 2 02-08-04 01:09 AM

u from green bay so u must know the packers
ur like ahmand green and Im like the eagels linebacker
Im about to hit u wit such great force
U gon have to pay an incerible amount of life support
I be the bring the symptons of fear and paralysis
try to shoot me dogg all ur shots be missin
my lyrics are of the supreme the higher
u say u got beef but all u got is oscar meyer
I be over here bringing the torture
my burning lyrcis be bringing the shorchere
so now its time to lose u ran out of luck
this a bubba in jail moment u been fucked

Dope Name 02-08-04 01:31 AM

here, I'll start keyin' now...

Dope Name 02-08-04 01:41 AM

Aw son, I'm sorry to see you didn't learn like you said you did
Awfully terrible, and seeing you writing made me feel sorry kid
See you're from orlando, don't matter, you still won't beat me
Your verses are so simple they belongs in The World Of Disney
You keep your secret away? Nope avi clearly states you're gay
I study my prey, and so far, you're just one of my daily delays
Staying away? Nope once again you're missing the whole point
While you hope to be dope, you still ain't on level with a joint
You missin' a sig, Like you're not original and sign annonomous
You're doomed, with you being the weaker side out of both us

blah blah

and once again...

i don't know I'm bored

Dope Name 02-09-04 06:34 PM

blah blah blah, just vote...

Dope Name 02-10-04 04:11 PM

Blah blah, just vote already...

Pariah 02-10-04 04:35 PM

my thoughts
 
I dont have enough posts to officially vote, but here is my thoughts...
Dope definitly took this. Zikio came too simplistic. His punches weren't creatvie enough and lacked any real punch. It was a nice try w/ the personal,it just didn't do the job. Dope Name, decent punches w/good personals and some nice creativity. Didn't need much to though, to take this one. Not even close.My Vote: Dope Name

Tactixx 02-10-04 05:18 PM

my vote goes to dope name, hit punches hit harder and i like the structure better, some words didnt rhyme that well but they still did the job
-zikioversion2 your punches were there but weak.... no creativity really.... the opener was ok i guess....the closer was weak...alot of filler....keep at it...
vote- Dope name
return the favor-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112839

Dope Name 02-12-04 09:47 PM

Blah Blah, someone vote on this, now...

ThA Ce 02-12-04 09:54 PM

Dope was dope man but i liked version 2 w/ the packers eagles shit dat was niice

ThA Ce

Vote-Dope

Dope Name 02-13-04 09:29 PM

Blah Blah Blah, vote c'mon people, this can be closed if some people check it out...

Dope Name 02-14-04 10:32 PM

Blah Blah Blah vote on this already...

Reefer 02-14-04 10:38 PM

a l l o f y o u s u c k a t r a p p i n g s o g e t s o m e r e a l l y r a p p e r s i n h e r e r i g h t n o w

Dope Name 02-14-04 10:49 PM

really rappers?

herb...


call out feeble then, dumbass...

~RaPiDfIrE~ 02-15-04 01:19 AM

having the same problems in my battle...lol....nobody voting....ehh....lol....Dope takes this for just having better hits without a doubt.....Zikio would sway from subject of battle and diss his opponent with dumb shit....Dope at least had better personals and some funny punches

Quote:
From Dope Name:
You keep your secret away? Nope avi clearly states you're gay
I study my prey, and so far, you're just one of my daily delays
first line of this quote was best line of this battle without a doubt.....u had harder hits...period...

Punches - Dope
Personals - Dope...av punch...and orlando
Opener - Dope
Closer - Dope
Vote - Dope....if there is any reason y this should not count as a vote....then there is something wrong...lol....Dope had better hits period....Zikio needs to up his style and drop more direct and harder hits.....

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