GaZeeBo vs Killaconceptz
 

aight 10 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin

i challenged anybody and he answered so here we are

blind spits
due at 3 eastern time

aight gl

yoit's me

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ayo i'm like a black samson i'll pull da earth from under your knees-shake ya kapri's-and ya little ass to the third degree-i'm gettin' sick of rappers singin' da same song-dis' guy looked at my signature and still spelled my name wrong-bout' to teach you a lesson-during dis' session-cause Hold more gunz than an algebraic expression-thought you was gonna win well you's a hit man-cause whack rappers get layed down like a bike wit' no kickstand-everything i spit is real-my shit is ill-compare me to george forman cause i be all in ya grill-tryin' to pursue a career sorry to say your not goin' far-because in my mind you [suck] like a porn star-i'm a big dog you still rollin wit' kitties-dis' battle is ova cuz i'll neva catch myself gettin' beat by pookie from NEW JACK CITY.

That was i'll killaconceptz.. Keep spittin an rappin bout kittens, cause my hands are cold and you cary mittens....

what the fuck is this kid talkin bout^^^^^^lol

goin easy on this kid

I'm blastin through ur tough skin wit the use of the slugs from my uuzi
You could put my name in a marquee and still not have a chance to move me...
I kick whack kids like you all day just to practice breakin spines
I’m stuffin rulers down your mouth so you can try and drop straight lines...
Your demise...Im tellin it and your skills...im deadin it
You Tell Me..anything hott ever come out of connecticut!
Your skill has nuttin to spare and i’m bout to hit a strike
He thinks he hott and he's got a fan...his verse is right there..LOOK
This aint no storytellin website..are u rappin or writing a book?...
I could hand you a jordan poster
.......................................but u still couldn’t rip a mic!

hope i didn come too weak but ...............votes

my bad messed up the last 4 lines
i accidenmtally dragged the lines to the top!!

heres my verse

I'm blastin through ur tough skin wit the use of the slugs from my uuzi
You could put my name in a marquee and still not have a chance to move me...
I kick whack kids like you all day just to practice breakin spines
I’m stuffin rulers down your mouth so you can try and drop straight lines...
Your demise...Im tellin it and your skills...im deadin it
You Tell Me..anything hott ever come out of connecticut!
He thinks he hott and he's got a fan...his verse is right there..LOOK
This aint no storytellin website..are u rappin or writing a book?...
Your skill has nuttin to spare and i’m bout to hit a strike
I could hand you a jordan poster
.......................................but u still couldn’t rip a mic!

see how the lines are swapped up there^^ sorry for posting agin but i couldnt edit for some reason??!!

Ight Zeebo hit harder w./ his personals and punches The conneticut line was dope...Killa didnt bring much to the table and the by not punctuating his shit made it worse,
Structure-Killa That ish was wack,,, punctuate yer shit, w/ out punctuation there is no flow, Zeebos structure could use some work to.
Flow- Killas structure fucked his flow up big time....Zeebo u kept it on track good tight flow...
wordplay-creativity is a tie , but killas shit didnt even rhyme at times..

V/ Gazeebo

Yo Honestly judge and vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110833

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Killa had no flow. Gazeebo had good punches and personals.
Killa had no structure. Wordplay was a tie.
Gezeebo gets my vote and Kill you need to elevate your flow and punches and stuff like that.
peace.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Here we go:
9 catorgories rated 1-10 ...
Gazeebo vs. Killa Concepz
opn- 6.0 > 5.0

cls- 6.0 > 5.0

pnch- 7.0 > 6.5

flw- 9.0 > 3.5

strc- 9.0 > 1.0

meta- 6.5 > 4.5

pers- 6.0 > 5.0

wp- 6.5 > 5.5

enjy- 7.0 > 5.5

Overall- 63.0 > 41.5 Vote : GaZeeBo

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

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Vote:~~~~Gazeebo

This battle was pretty onesided!

Killa, i just really didnt like ur structure... Clean it up a lil bit so a reader can understand it. Other than that i liked most of ur rhymes, some were pretty simple, but thats ok, you came average.

Gazeebo, i loved tha whole verse, from bar 1 to bar 10. The intro was great, the body was good, an the closer is where u def. put him on lock. Nice job both of you but once again my vote goes to Gazeebo!!

MAILCE

v/ - GaZeeBo...one sided battle by far.

Even though both verses were shit, atleast GazeeBo contained one personal. killaconcepz...you need to re-think your entire approach. Visit the wackness emergency centre and get some help there by checking out the tutorials...I dunno how u gettin new jack city and sum other crap in here...

Anyways, killaconcepz killed himself after that verse.


Return the favour and drop honest votes on my battles please. Thank you.

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