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BabyCapone 02-24-06 08:33 PM

16 Bars of Krack
 
If its beef , get two clips, man fuck it//
Too protect myself, at least two fist or tucked in//
When i shoot You two snitches duckin//"Cuz you tellin"
and use ya mouf more then two bitches fuckin//
Who's click is tucked in, We fightin together//
Walk through the tough storms and the fire together//
I Got a nine, but i still need that Buretta//
with a beam to put a dot over yah eye "like da letta"//
If you a customer, then I'll be right with yah//
Cuz it don't matter to me which of ya mans wanna see tha light quicker//
"Gotta be a slight richer"
and to do that, i gotta put the metal to ya frame like a nice picture//
I won't fuck with yah if you is just a nobody//
Some cats are filled with more shit then a fuckin Port-O-Pottys//
Thinkin they Swoll in a battle and can handel a Punchlina//
But the cat took so much Roids his lil dick turned to a Vagina//
You can leave it to tha Opera homie, Cuz you can't test this//
I been burnin up tha block thats why tha kidd stay " Young and Restless"



Thats just a lil freestyle i was thinkin bout hit me up tell me whut ya think get at me ~WUN~

.TeamOne. 02-25-06 12:34 AM

freestyle....yeah, right....
it was decent at best. played lines........
When i shoot You two snitches duckin//"Cuz you tellin"
and use ya mouf more then two bitches fuckin//
^played

decent
I Got a nine, but i still need that Buretta//
with a beam to put a dot over yah eye "like da letta"//
^decent concept but nobody would get it in audio. the delivery was bad but i guess the set up doesnt really matter bc the wordplay isnt tha type that needs set up

I won't fuck with yah if you is just a nobody//
Some cats are filled with more shit then a fuckin Port-O-Pottys//
^ played to fuck....never ever say this again

"Gotta be a slight richer"
and to do that, i gotta put the metal to ya frame like a nice picture//
^ prolly ur best line although it wasnt that good. i've never seen this concept before so its original to me, but i dont think it was too hard hittin.....

overall, i've seen WAAY much better.......
5.5/10
takes a lot to impress me these days. nice multis in tha beginning tho homie

BabyCapone 02-25-06 01:28 PM

Fa sho cuzo I was just spittin stupid I aint in tha whole text thang ~WUN~

CORY DA REALIST 02-25-06 03:42 PM

yo man dat shit was strait Some cats are filled with more shit then a fuckin Port-O-Pottys//
dat was a hot line man peace

BabyCapone 02-25-06 04:30 PM

good lookz fam , i was just bullshittin wiht punches and shit

Mc Wicked 02-25-06 04:40 PM

That wasnt 16 bars it was only like 9

BabyCapone 02-26-06 09:31 PM

I don't count bars downsouth like you do homie i count each line as a bar see my // there are 16 so yeah get whut i mean fam

Mc Wicked 02-27-06 05:42 PM

oh well I was just saying there is a difference between a line and a bar

Line = I won't fuck with yah if you is just a nobody//

Bar = I won't fuck with yah if you is just a nobody//
Some cats are filled with more shit then a fuckin Port-O-Pottys//

but anyway that was some nice rhymes nothin real special but nothin bad

BabyCapone 02-28-06 07:28 AM

No doubt fam stay up ~WUN~


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