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Ameen vs BostonLyricist
10 Lines
NO Crew/Hate/Dick Ridin votes 20 mins to reply ill spit first...... |
Bitch you aint got a fuckin chance with me, better luck battlin your MOTHER//
Cant afford any mistakes cuz im bein watched like i was on BIG BROTHER//* You actin hard but i didnt excpet for something fake to back up TALK// its like you made a wish and now its bein granted cuz you get to meet PAC// the Wu-tang is weak compared to me so get ready for the 37TH CHAMBER/ Dont Push Me aint just a song cuz you just unleashed a infinite SOURCE~OF~ANGER// The Tempature is 911 and micheal moore is gettin ROASTED~WITH~SARS/ Fuck bein a wack battler im flautin realness like cribs BOASTED~CELEB~CARS/ Bitch you dumb challengin someone with real heat that be HOT// don't bother replyin that shit is gunna get your dumbass SHOT// Please vote on my other battles....peace |
aiyo.....i've given you 20 mins to spit, your gunna be dq if u don't spit soon
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bitch i didnt challenge you,ya stepped to the crop and the cream//
get that ass stomped out like kane did dat boi now what Ameen// put my mic to your heart like a stethascope// my lyrical indimidation have you breathin like john q's son like he doin the breath stroke// ya came to this challenge son totally un prepared// thoughy you was well aware my blazin ryhmes have bones naked and bare// i move niccah losely,opponnents im non chosee,im hot like a lava jacusie// seein ya post give me more laughs then white folk watchin i love lucy// my bars will lite ya up like time square at new years// serve you shot after shot like a seasonal finale of cheers// fuck it ima stay on the sitcoms and drop bombs through my text// your a virgin kidd you all city and no sex// (sex in the city) this is fear factor youngin your greatest test// you have to suckyour mom dick while feelin on your pops brest// or just give it up like usher and say i cant win and confess// it was ight ive seen better from me...vote it up |
i said 10 lines bro....oh well....uppin 4 votes...
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Im new to this site so I can't vote yet. But i would say Boston had the edge there.
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A Yo
ight all voters please only count my first ten lines
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Ameen- ya verse was aight i wasnt feelin it that much...But ya had some good punches some hit hard but some didnt...You had a decent flow wit ya verse...and ya structure was decent but could have been a little better then...But overall you did good in dis battle wit punches...
BostonLyricist- Ya verse was much better i thought i liked it more...ya punches i liked to i think they were a tiny bit better then his they hit hard...You had a good flow...and ya structure and wordplay was good also ..so overall you got this battle with better punches they hit much harder...but only by a tiny bit... v/BostonLyricist |
Ameen: You were throwing punches I seen, they just werent really connecting. TALK and PAC dont rhyme, you feel me. Flowz was decent, but aint have a lot of feeling in them, maybe a little more wordplay next time to set up your punches. Stop tryin to stress the point that your rhyming, It just makes me look twice at ya rhymes, and it was easier to pick out that you didnt rhyme. Try to get a lil more personal with it, use some harder metas, and get creative. Not a bad verse, just needs a little bit of work.
BostonLyricist: I think BostonLyricist has really been elevating, pretty good battle here. I seen some nice metas, that were personals that you were using as punches. LoL did you get all of that? Nice flow, you are still streching out your lines though and forcing some of the punches. Tighten the structure up and get a little more syllably equal with your lines. I notice you are using more multi-syllable rhymes though, thats good and helps with the complexity and such with your verse. Good verse overall though. v/BostonLyricist |
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I GIVE YO SHIT BOUT A 1.5/10 ...LEAST IT RHYMES IN SOME PARTS..HOPE THE NEXT DUDE AINT AS BAD... |
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IGHT I GIVE YO SHIT BOUT A 2.5/10..ONLY CAUSE YOU HAD HALF A SLAP AN A GAY PUNCH ...YALL NEED TO ELEVATE AN FOCUS MORE ON YO OPP...DONT NO ONE WANNA HEAR BOUT YOU..THATS WHAY OPEN MIC IS FOR...YOUR BATTLING YOUR OPP. SO HE SHOULD HE THE CENTER OF YO RHYMES AN DISSES..DONT GIVE YO SELF PROPS WHEN YOUR SUPPOSED TO BE DISSING HIM...WASTE OF LINES... YALL CAN RHYME THATS A GOOD START..NOW JUST NEED SOME ELEVATION.. MY VOTE = BOSTAN.. |
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Ameen- Verse Was Ok.. Punches Didnt Hit Very Had.. Flow Was A Lil Off.. And - - - Dont Make It A Multi....And Structure Was Ok Overal Ok Verse Boston Lyricist- Verse Was Good In Some Parts, Punches Were There, And Had A Couple Personals, Flow Was Good, And Structure Was Ok.. Overal Good Verse Break Down II Punches- Boston Personals- Boston Flow- Tie Wordplay- Tie Multis- Ameen Metaphors- Tie Structure- Tie Originality- Tie Vocab- Tie Final Vote- Boston Lyricist Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726 |
BL the length wasnt equal but they were filled with tight word plays and punches..they all connected and were like bombs........i'ld give you 9 for everything plus personalsand flows...which were impressing.....gd gd
Ameen...you had punches but they didnt connect and didnt hit aas hard as bl's...ur verse was coo but TALK na d PAC dont rhyme dawg..a minus for this...i personally didnt notice any word play...and ya flow wasnt as cool as bl's... cool battle tho v: bl |
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