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Who's in an Emergency?
Who needs :help: ?
I'll be glad to answer any questions |
i'd take any advice you have to offer
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Well....
Ask a question... And i'll help you out |
could you read a battle or 2 of mine and give me some pointers
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1055759 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100226 |
ic an't think of any q's but i just need you to give me a little help and tell me what i could do to elevate
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Ok..... Here we go....
Fix The Structure Right now your structure is like this ............................................... .......................................... .............................................. .................................................. ....................................... ........................................... That structure is some what annoying...Bring it together like this ............................................... ................................................. ............................................... ................................................. ................................................ ................................................. It looks alot better... _______________________________ Wordplay Your wordplay is pretty good.. just need to up the vocabulary Try to use some Multies also.... _______________________________ Punches And Personals Right now... your punches are decent.. but not hard hitting Try to dig up personals against the person your battling And just put something together from that It will make your verse come hard against them And it will give you a better chance to win.... _____________________________________ Thats all i can really think of right now... But i will come back when i think of something else |
thanks a lot
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Yeah, I thought I beat this kid illogical pretty easily... but people weren't votin my way.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...18&pagenumber=1 You wanna look at that and tell me how not to be so wack?
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illunatic if you want go vote on the battle i showed you wiht bk
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Sam Skillet
Even ya shit out like i told Blend Ya shit isn't good structured.... Basically... read what i said for Blend It will help both of you out.......... |
ILL, you said something about structure and how it "looks good". Nigga, when you rappin' structure dont come to mind then. Cats be bringin' up structure in yall battles, but its really use less. For example...look at some of Chrit's work, he one of the best, but his structure is all over the place. It dont matter about structure at all, as long as you get ya point across in a good solid flow.
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^I agree with Ape. Every artist has their own style, as long as it works for them then that's all that matters.
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In text it matters I think but it doesnt in audio as long as you can follow it.
But in text the readers have to be able to follow it as well |
^Exactly
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105349
peeps votin 4 him....but i think i k1lled em************************************************ ************************************************** ************************************************** *** |
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