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dOpEbOi 210 vs Ebonicz
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-23-05 at 05:37 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
dOpEbOi 210 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 03:38 PM.
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Ebonicz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 03:44 PM.
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u ready mayn????????????????????????????????????????
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nigga think he witty wit a name like ebonicz
but u couldnt spit intelligent if u was hookd on phonix he mighta won 1 more battle..but shit,dats irrelevant rememba this loss wen u got grand children, so ull b able to tell-of-it nigga get no play but his excuse is celibacy im more hardcore den bondage porn..so watch how u comin-at-me cuz my rhymes is grade A...n at best yours is a C u couldnt b a gangsta even if yo initials was O-G dis'll b tha last time ull eva wanna get ina battle wit me... celibacy-not wanting to ingage in sexual intercourse or relations |
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i actually meant to put "cuz my rhymes is grade A...n at best yours is a D |
now you should face it.. when you spit you better pace it
cuz when i take it to tha basics i start to race it now youll slowly in take my verbal abusion you hear it in ya dream you feel intursion but my verse just haunts.. you my style taunts.. you..you think this is a jaunt.. you know you chances are gaunt so dope boi . do you have any hope or joy. well in one battle i crush that my scopes no toy ill snipe you out in a blink of an eye you dream gone so don't act hard don't act intence you aint extream son i would maybe say im scared of you but i aint got homophobia i know it ova when i a battle a chump wit ebonaphobia if you don't know what gaunt or jaunt mean look it up |
uppin fa votes fa real mayn....please...this suppose 2 b a battle between us n nigga spit tha whole thing bout him...like mayb 2 disses...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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well in one battle i'll crush u... my scopes no toy ****** that what i ment guese i should pick up phoniex
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uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: dOpEbOi 210
HAVE TO GO WITH dope he did not have two lines rhyming again, I liked his flow his personels where ok but both need to work on it iight. and the opener-closure goes to him and the rhyming and the multis and the vocab a lil this is what helped him! nigga think he witty wit a name like ebonicz but u couldnt spit intelligent if u was hookd on phonix he mighta won 1 more battle..but shit,dats irrelevant rememba this loss wen u got grand children, so ull b able to tell-of-it nigga get no play but his excuse is celibacy im more hardcore den bondage porn..so watch how u comin-at-me 5/10 rt the fav in my links |
Voted For: Ebonicz
wow ebonics took dis battle Dopes verse was boring man i didnt even get 2 finish man he was jus rhymin n rhyming ebonics had betta punches n betta flow as well as betta structure Return da favor iight peace |
Voted For: dOpEbOi 210
Both ya verses was simple yall had basic rhymes so i'll break it down like dis punches=dope boi flow= ebonicz meta=N/A structure=dope boi dope boi verse= 3/5 ebonicz= 2/5 keep elavatin pplz return da fav... |
Voted For: dOpEbOi 210
this was a close one..not all that good, but i feel dope boi took it. his punches were better. all tho he worded them kinda poorly, i think he came harder in this. not really too many personals in this battle that couldve geared towards one person. but alot of wordplay in this that i was feelin from dope boi. i think u got potential, i just think u should elevate a lot...ur flows are nice, but ur missing something, and it dont all tie together to me...but i liked it... ebonics-good drop. but i think ur structure was bad. i think some of ur lines werent complete,and then some of em was stretched, so that was not coo...ur puncehs werent that hard either...i was feelin ur wordplay a lil, but i also think u should elavate alot...yall got potential to be dope, but i think yall missin soemthing. overall-i think yall should elevate,. this one was close, but not al ot of dopeness in this one...NO HATE, just elevate a lil. next time, focus on ur punches. plz RTF on battle against cj...CAUSE I took tha time to vote on this...NO HATE, just plz RTF...good battle, and elevate... v/dope boi ................1........... |
Voted For: dOpEbOi 210
a week ass battle... opener-dope punchlines-dope structure-dope.....ebonicz ya line were madd long creativity-dope multis-nun wordplay-nun personals-nun finisher-dope enjoyed-dope....at least he tried da have some creativity nahmean ebonicz dont think u usin big ass words dat da shit was hott fam lol RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG |
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