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"No Where To Hide"...Yet Another Track...
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Word...last track for The Innovation LP. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213951 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212786 Leave links and I'll return the favor. |
I just heard a loud as POP!
WHOA THERE GO ANOTHER ! Lmfao, lemme start the track over.. ok I dont know why, but when I seen the title of the song I was expecting a sample from the old song "no where to run too baby, no where to hide" that would've been dope the beat is coo, not somethin I would rap on, "I leave all you pussy bitches brutally diminished" stood out. lol, it was dope. i dont know, its somethin asbout your flow. it isnt smooth, its not choppy or nothin and you dont rhyme THAT much off beat, you just rap funny. and some of your lines - ionno - its like, you dont know how to make certain words stand out. its like you put emphasis on the wrong words. work on that. overall, this is a slightly decent track. thats all I can say this feedback is for the RG hit up my track diamonds in the rough |
Fucking sleepers...
Up........... |
I'm not in a good mood
so I won't leave feed but the track wasn't bad 1 |
where can i start...i def hear slim in ur style...spaghetti...stay away from using food in the beginning of ur flow...middle..shit or end...u word like that for a reminise...not ur brain
..all in all..i couldnt feel the track..didnt know what ur tryin to convey u started off on track somewhere but strayed...work on the meoldy. yo im new posting and new to this site all-together...and what ever i say is strickly crtitique.. peace |
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