RapVerse.com Community - random verse #1

this is just one of LOTZ and LOTZ of pages i wrote through my notebooks while trying ta write to audios but was too wack ta write to a beat so im releasing those random verses i put such thought into as o.m's after im done releasing all my random verses that never got past my own eyes then im officially through with o.m's..some of the flow might be a lil off and the structure might not be perfect but its all good

there once was this one burban kid that was a follower
he always fronted he was just simply intolerable
he never been shot, never been rushed to the hospital
never touched a glock never seen a scene that was hostal
he's hiding it n' shit so he could be rhyming it n' shit
he even tried ta spit atleast he aint biting the shit
but people aint liking the shit they tellin him ta just quit
he bout had it he's ready to put himself into a casket
people dont care if he's blasted they want him off the planet
him and Indeph is buds now they been close a few months now
he already half-way trained now he had a few names now
first off it was hood_dawg, changed names to straight aim
then the last one he had was Alpha Assassin
as he continued to be hated and demonstrated that he elevated
he was clearly showing people that he was tryin ta make it
he started ta admit that he never even touched a millimeter
he has no heaters and he's getting eager ta change inta a leader
things are getting clearer and he'll try as long as he's here

lol i wrote this so long ago and it aint quite a full verse :( but yo gimme some feed on this shit