Lyrically Gifted vs Mystic.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 tko
4-1 tko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-06 at 12:47 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Closed - 3-0 KO

Lyrically Gifted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-06 12:52 PM.

you shouldddd.......................................ac cept?

ill accept wen i want to lol....i got stuff to do thats y i put it 1 day check 1 day drop

Mystic. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-06 01:47 PM.

Mystic Verses Simple, I Can See Through It Like Wet T's
Verses Couldnt Get Hunnys Wet, If He Put It On A Jet Ski
Now Lets See, Mistic Verses Are Sorta Like A Mystery
No One Understands Wack Shit, Unknown Like Lost History

I Bet Influential Jumpen On Ya Dick Sayin "Vote For Me Mysic"
Prolly Know The Kid So If Ya Whiped out ya dick u kno he'd grip it
You Think Im Horrific, But I Know That Im teriffic Like Magic
Throwin You A Funeral, Casue The Way I See It's Endin In Tragic

Want My Verse? Cant Have It, Go Bite Someone Elses Shit
I Chopp You In 2 So Ya Can Say That Ya Personality's Split
I Got More Punches Then Kids With Black Belts In Karatie
Leave Mystic Lookin Like The Moon With Craters In His Body

Lyrical 12 Guage Shotty,Have Head Lines On The News Bout Mystic
You Cant Expect A Win If You Drop A Verse Like You Did Against Kriptic
Arising Spirits Was Ya Open Mic Well Your Spirits Gunna Be Next
Cut Ya Heart You And Give It To, ill Let You Handal Ya Own Death

You cant be serious...

Ya verse is a light Packer ill get ya men thrown
N you aint scorin shit in this battle...
...........................like droppin a pass in the endzone
'Diss knee' will hit ya gut ..guess u gotta sue me dude
Cuz Your incomplete....as if your a fuckin 'looneytune'
Ya impatient u declined the last battle so fast like u on a free way
Wen it was only 25 minutes in...and u set the check for 3 days
Slow ya ass down...dont matter wen i check..ya ass'l get wrecked
Cuz my verse is drivin drunk...n is gunna whip-lash ya neck
You can talk tuff and 'lyrically' drop some weak punches
Cuz im takin ya verse as a 'gift' and gobble it up like im eatin lunches
U try n say i bitched out the battle...Y would i? u not a threat
But unlike u dawg i got a bitch ...and a real life off the net
Im about to spit mean and dont think its going past you
Cuz u cant read my dope shit..seein i spit a fuckin loogey at you
I guess in the end..u really arent that gifted lyrically anyways
As for written whack as fuck verses...u got that gift in many ways

w/e lol

Ya verse is a light Packer ill get ya men thrown
N you aint scorin shit in this battle...
...........................like droppin a pass in the endzone
'Diss knee' will hit ya gut ..guess u gotta sue me dude
Cuz Your incomplete....as if your a fuckin 'looneytune'
Ya impatient u declined the last battle so fast like u on a free way
Wen it was only 25 minutes in...and u set the check for 3 days
Slow ya ass down...dont matter wen i check..ya ass'l get wrecked
Cuz my verse is drivin drunk...n is gunna whip-lash ya neck
You can talk tuff and 'lyrically' drop some weak punches
Cuz im takin ya verse as a 'gift' and gobble it up like im eatin lunches
U try n say i bitched out the battle...Y would i? u not a threat
But unlike u dawg i got a bitch ...and a real life off the net
Im about to spit mean and dont think its going past you
Cuz u cant read my dope shit..seein i spit a fuckin loogey at you
I guess in the end..u really arent that gifted lyrically anyways
As for written whack as fuck verses...u got that gift in many ways

shit lol....i fucked up on the verse thing...oh well they will only see 1 of them...but yeah up up up

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umm... anyone gunna vote on this shit or what??..been here for a while.

Voted For: Mystic.

Vote- Mystic

Punches-Mystic
Flow-Tie
Delievry-Mystic
Multi-Neither

Lyrically gifted you had some good ideas for punches they just didnt come out right and ur flow was okay need to work on mulit's

Mystic-Cleary better written flow was simple but decent
punches were okay and delievery was good feeling the emotion just work on the multi's also

NO hate Just keep elevating

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