HottnessDefined vs D. Cepth Shun
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
check in:30 mins
Post verse: 15 mins

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-10-04 at 02:39 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

HottnessDefined has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 02:10 PM.

wut de fuck iz a d septh shun//
im stickin a gun up ya bum//
hbbling along cuz i cut off ur legz when u tried 2 run//
i rhyme for fun//
an u r not my bitch like dope an forsaken//
u fat pig im guna eat u like bacon

D. Cepth Shun has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 02:16 PM.

Animals make better songs than him, like a fucking Oriole….
Fag though he was slick, trying to copy lines from the tutorials.
His record doesn’t define hot, cause his record is a losing one.
Ya records ugly, and if you elevated you still wouldn’t Gruesome. (Grew Some)
Posting fucking wack shit, and in this battle you not even ready.
I mean Mental Murderous got tired of you, he banning you Already!

click the link.

Ye Im Battling A Newb Cause I'm Pissed Off....
Annoyed Too Much By Him......

i beet u 2 u fukk my verse wuz tight an hot u got owned

Shut The Fuck Up... Your Verse was Fucking Shit..... Stop Trying.... I Didnt Even Try And I'm Merking You....Your Verse Was Shit...

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

HottnessDefined

wut de fuck iz a d septh shun//
im stickin a gun up ya bum//
this line made me think your gay:wtf:1/10
hbbling along cuz i cut off ur legz when u tried 2 run//
i rhyme for fun//
syllable count way off and non-effective 0/10
an u r not my bitch like dope an forsaken//
u fat pig im guna eat u like bacon
1/10 god...in battles your supposed to diss
your opponent not me or dopeman 2/10

overall: 1/10

Animals make better songs than him, like a fucking Oriole….
Fag though he was slick, trying to copy lines from the tutorials.
da da doo....about a 6/10
His record doesn’t define hot, cause his record is a losing one.
Ya records ugly, and if you elevated you still wouldn’t Gruesome.
wordplay nice again....6.5/10
Posting fucking wack shit, and in this battle you not even ready.
I mean Mental Murderous got tired of you, he banning you Already!
nice personal effective....7/10

overall: 6.5/10

vote: d.cepth shun

This was feedback posted for D. Cepth Shun
 

lmao one sided battle man that guy needs to learn how to rhyme

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

d cep shun won no doubt this ather guy is ether wack or was high,
wordlplay dcs,
flow dcs
vocab dcs
punchen dcs
overall desep had a way better verse beetter wordplay and better flow,
punches, hotness didnt even throw none

Upping Please Vote Here... Leave Links So I can return The Favor

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

merked em...had better punches better flow better structure...that otha guy had da whackest verse i ever seen in my life...he should leave da site....
vote for d.cept shun for better punches flor and structure

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

wut de fuck iz a d septh shun//
im stickin a gun up ya bum//
no not good at all 1/10
hbbling along cuz i cut off ur legz when u tried 2 run//
i rhyme for fun//
nah man its wack 1/10
an u r not my bitch like dope an forsaken//
u fat pig im guna eat u like bacon
HELL NO 0/10

2/30

Animals make better songs than him, like a fucking Oriole….
Fag though he was slick, trying to copy lines from the tutorials.
lol not bad 6/10
His record doesn’t define hot, cause his record is a losing one.
Ya records ugly, and if you elevated you still wouldn’t Gruesome. (Grew Some)
um not good at all 3/10
Posting fucking wack shit, and in this battle you not even ready.
I mean Mental Murderous got tired of you, he banning you Already!
OUCH! 9/10

Overall 18/30

This was feedback posted for D. Cepth Shun
 

hmm I already voted on this I think wit an alias, I think, so votin again would make it look like d/r or maybe its cheating, i unno, I aint gonna take a chance