hard-one\\s//poetictendenceez
u know the deal you drop first alright goodluck
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ok..i'll check in....this should be a joke tho...this nigga is stupid ass~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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ill keep the blood rushin to ya head, wit violent concushions\
uprupting dreams that are obscene after you spit at me\ you cant see me lyrically , let alone physically\ and spiritaully who ever you worship cant even defeat me\ yo lemme get this dick straight, and pound this cake\ commin at me , its lyrical death , enjoy ya fate\ sayin you fired up , shit lemme douse that fire\ cripple ya style and then make you retire\ the way im spittin make these niggas sick\ got them snappin at me , plus they on my dick\ cant feel me, cuz they pussies to big\ heres a shovel , theirs a lot , and a grave to dig\ my metaphores are off the hook , and are considered vicoius\ so stop pissen shit without lyricall precision\ cause listen ill leave your body stained in red crimson\ physically im beyond your intellect\ my shit hits direct wit styles that are in-ept\ what kinda name is maximus lemme explain\ its represents the geniods in your brain that makes you insane\ stands for termanology beyond your game\ maximus stand for the EPITIMY of putting you to shame\ so pay the piper peter and pack ya shit and leave\ and watch a true lyricist make these cats greive\ |
this nigga's got two aliases, and he called himself out
someone check bitch slapped and see what I'm talkn about a stupid ass nigga who's gonna post a pre-written and if that weren't bad enough, this mother fucker's rhyme is still bitten at least try to beat me, please give me a real battle cause i'm beating you, like I got you girl in the saddle ha ha faggot, watching me fuck her gives you a "hard on" i'm fuckn playn your girl like a million dollar Don Juan fuck you and your rhyme, this decision isn't a "hard-one" the hard part will be getting this viewed by some-one I don't need 15 fuckn lines to tear you to lyrical pieces it's a waste of time and rhyme, "you suck" is my thesis |
ok......uppin (1)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~
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hard one i thought took this battle, it was longer, had better wordplay, and had a bit better rhymes than poetic
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um yea so poetic tenenceez (my bad on the spellin) took this... that shit had to be pre-written cause you threw no personals what so ever not to mention you didn't use any of the obvious things to get him on.... oh well.... so the fact he called you on it gives him the win in my opinion plus he had personals...which you should learn about and punches..that made you look like a herb..plus he didn't even use all his lines..vote- not that i can but poetic got this
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whoops hit that up with ya thoughts thanx for taking the time later...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2093#post992093 |
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^ best line in the battle everything was pretty much even on this punches/ wordplay/ flow/ personals, but PT made me chuckle with those 2 barz vote = PT cant poll my vote cause i dont know how, but i will 2marrow |
opener poetic
closer poetic punches poetic personal poetic wordplay poetic vocab poetic overal poetic hit this up honestly please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99109 |
Opener : Poe
Closer : Poe Wordplay: Poe Flow : Poe Punches: Poe Need i say more? . |
ye i agree with everyone else poe grabed every catagory with no doubt about it.
my vote poe vote on this battle...its bein slept on....................... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97818 |
yo ima ahve to go wit poetic on this one for the reason that he had a punch lol.
personals and punches usually win battles and the other guy didnt have any. return the favor with a vhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=99005ote on this |
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thanks ya'll...uppin this...i should be up 4-0....who hasn't voted out of the niggas that voted? how do I figure that out? anyway...uppin (2)
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