Eki vs CarsonJetx2
 

10-20 lines
no crews
no hate
same old rules...

his pic:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108459

CarsonJetx2 is about to be CarsonJet Devided by two
WACK as the first part and Ness as second- but its still you
God punished you with that thing - i refuse to call it a face
for your pic to be on RB.com - makes rest of us feel discrased
If you were to write a book on being wack- it would be a best seller
When inserting your name in the poll -there should be a wackness error
Unlike volume your skill cant be turned up - becaouse your stuck on low
your rhyming style is as effective as a light bulb that doesnt glow
Your eyes make asians jelouse- you cant see -thats why your so wack
Only way your avatar could resemble you- if the eyes moved way back
I was gonna spit more - but i opened up your pic again
than i thought " its not his foult" ugly perents are to blame

I just seen this....
checked in

eki....

Oh my.....

Are u seriouse?....
I don't mean to be mean but you call that^ tight?
Your name's sounds quite what ur drops look like...
That's right....
A Key?, Please,I feel the need to go underground
Like the verizon guy an check if u can hear me now
Yes your that below, stretched,and you have no flo...
Your RapBattle's version of Survivor Allstar's homo
Way ahead of ya self, Eki..get back in that desoto...
And understand I can merk you even witta posted Photo
U can watch in slomo...but where jus slowin polls..
delayed 5-0's...do yourself a favor, an start touchin ya toes

waitin on votes-(1)

ok this battle was blah..
Eki didnt really have much to offer in the battle
very frontlinish to me
flow was decent..but punches were not landing.
structure was decent...but they still lacked a good hard punch
overall i think u can do better...
your verse was seemd like somethin i would read in the frontlines

just being honest...

carson your shit was kinda blah too...
seemes rushed to me..seen you better too..i dont know what happened
either way..your verse was slightly better
punches did hit a little harder

ok gonna go wit carson here..
i know both can do better....so please do so in your next battle

v/carson

CarsonJetx2 is about to be CarsonJet Devided by two
WACK as the first part and Ness as second- but its still you
didnt hit hard so so punch

God punished you with that thing - i refuse to call it a face
for your pic to be on RB.com - makes rest of us feel discrased
second part is good though

If you were to write a book on being wack- it would be a best seller
When inserting your name in the poll -there should be a wackness error
lmao this was a good punch like the first part

Unlike volume your skill cant be turned up - becaouse your stuck on low
your rhyming style is as effective as a light bulb that doesnt glow
too simple didnt hit hard but so so

Your eyes make asians jelouse- you cant see -thats why your so wack
Only way your avatar could resemble you- if the eyes moved way back
dont understand the first part..second is aight

I was gonna spit more - but i opened up your pic again
than i thought " its not his foult" ugly perents are to blame
aight punch coulda been flipped and made better


Are u seriouse?....
I don't mean to be mean but you call that^ tight?
Your name's sounds quite what ur drops look like...
That's right....
hard punch very good opener

A Key?, Please,I feel the need to go underground
Like the verizon guy an check if u can hear me now
lol 2nd part is aight but dont understand the first

Yes your that below, stretched,and you have no flo...
Your RapBattle's version of Survivor Allstar's homo
aight punch so so but didnt hit hard

Way ahead of ya self, Eki..get back in that desoto...
And understand I can merk you even witta posted Photo
nice this was pretty funny tho..decent

U can watch in slomo...but where jus slowin polls..
delayed 5-0's...do yourself a favor, an start touchin ya toes
nice closer very good punch... you shoulda explained the last part
but i understood it

overall i gotta go with cj2

please vote on the links in my sig with full verse breakdowns please

lol cj2 got this one with the can you hear me now line alone, eki u did alright, but your stuff doesn't make me smile or say damn that's witty, it makes me wanna check to see if you actually got five wins. Try and get some more similies and metaphors in your rap...
Vote cj2

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