Round II: DeadlyVision Vs Mad Dog
 

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Mad my negga....your reign is OVA

^ Not before yours

Ok i've done the track saved it and everything...but my soundclick isn't uploading ANYTHING...Nostradamaus has my verse (aim = U Wan Taco) if someone could get my track off him and upload onto their soundclick i'd be grateful as fuck

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(Lyrics)
Raps a sport to learn like it's Athletical class,
You the type to hop skip jump and fall on ya arse,
It's such a shame...to think that you can rock the mic,
But even if the mic was stone you still wouldn't sound right,
Call it a fact of life kids should be seen and not heard,
...So why the hell won't DeadlyVision ever learn?,
...Ya think ya dope...but 1st ya need words,
And fuck a gat the only thing u tuck is your T-Shirt,
Listen to DV as he's raggin and whinin,
The only thing u'll ever be good at is poor timing,
So stop ya rhymin and then stop ya writing,
If i catch you on another song i'll strike you like lightning,
So quit the net fighting all ya tracks are just tiring,
They the songs we play to my son when we saying goodnight to him,
...Ya shits ridiculous...lets stick a pin in this,
Coz im so sick of spittin this but kiddies need a whippin quick,
So listen to me bitch as i proceed to end your existence,
Your flow is so persistant but i meant it in a shit description,
..Define ya DeadlyVision i think you should quit soon,
The only thing you killin is ya sperm count in ya gym suit,
...And A.I ceased the second that you cut me,
...Ya names the only way ya lines are on correct keys,
...Ya seem to be.. jus an overrated emcee,
Playin on ya net fame but never to break the boundaries,
Of the mainstream...kid believe...
...If I were you i'd take a permanant vacational leave,
Dead boxers can punch stronger to leave this bitch floored,
...so his crew got more ghosts than ouiji boards,
...Under the weather you seem, ya spit snot,
If ya nose was ya pen u'd prolly have writers block,
...This kids confused and blatantly stressed man,
When half his rap name is the same as an X-Man,
...Don't explain coz we pity this retard,
Ya tracks sound like you screamin for a sympathy card,
Speak up coz really most think you're a joke,
Same as every other netcee, how the fuck you a rogue?,
When you know ya flows so low the temperatures cold,
On the microphone you don't choke you practically froze,
...Ya rhymes are basic Rogue you better face it,
Ya jus a disgrace it's true ya goin no places,
...Not quite the greatest but one the fakest,
Been here since 2003 ya jus patient,
...Desperate to chase this but nowhere to go,
A suicide bombers ya only chance to blow,
And you tried to do this when you dropped ya terrorist track,
U in them bat caves hopin Osamas got ya back,
...You gave me the hack and now i'm merkin this nark,
Because your vocals deserve a slap from Peter Quistguard,

maddog took this shit with fuckin DOPE as fuck lyrics... i was feelin wordplay and vocab on this shit man... DV had some dope concepts and some good wordplay and shit to... both had good beats and flowed well but maddogs lyrics fuckin owned me... so imma have to go with him....

Vote- Maddog

mad dawg... niiice beat choice still... flow is pretty much off, sound like you almost whispering.. you got some ok punches.. hold up, re-starting, the buffer is fuckin around.. ok... i can't stand british accents rapping, y'all shud stick to jungle/ DnB... tuck the t-shirt... i dno, it's clever, but who does that.... pin in this set up on flow was cool sounding, but made no sense unless i jus couldn't hear the words over the accent.. ouija boards line was nice still... the fuck you a rogue, after that it was weak on flow all around.. your mic quality is horrible too..

Key - haha @ intro... LOTR... ch'yea... this beat is a banga son... nice choice.. your intro runs a lil long.. but u dissin him in it ne-way... your flow is by far superior.. willing to spread legs for a cock line was nice still yo... hook it... next... elton john... haha.... destine to rhyme explain what rap do... nice... no say neither s/C... coo coo... and your finisher was better too... period stays... yea, this is deff a better verse all around...

v- Deadly Vision..

peepin dv first... i love beats with this sample, ive heard so many, my fav is prolly this one or the one styles p n krumbsnatcha rimed over... damn dv ya voice sounds deeper on this lol u barry manaloe mutha fucka!!! seems like u sacraficed energy on this tho, and vocals seem alittle low... flow seems rushed on second verse and the punch ins are easily noticed... but these lyrics are bustin it!!!!!! lol yesterday u told me u was gonna put some funny samples in this... i dunno ima little dissapointed cuz i know u can come better... lets see if md lived up to the hype..


maddog... wooooo this beat is fire!!! but ferreal i hate ya voice... quality is lackin, too loud on tha vocals... i think dv's flow was a lil better, but maybe md's content is a lil better... and u get ahrd to understand... i got bored half way thru... nose was ya pen u'd have writers block???? i dont get it.... man i dont understand how ppl cant come up with ill punches... aint no thing to me.... lol at slap from peter quistgard... tha cep dude...

hmmmm honestly i expected more outta both... i know im at risk of being called a hate vote if i v/ for dv, and if i v/ for maddog dv is gonna b mad.. lol im honestly gonna vote for who i thought won... i just gotta go back n peep a few more times, cuz i want to be completely fair... i will edit w/ my vote...

yep relistening i gotta say that dv just executed his verse better all around... spread ya legs for a cock, grab tecks, spousal abuse lol hmmmm... yea ima have to say this is a close call... ima vote for dv, but i can completely understand if md wants my vote dissqualified cuz we aint cool... i just hope y'all know im a fair voter n voted honestly....

v/ dv

Aight up

i guess its

2-1

Lets get it poppin kids

hmmm...close ass battle..but..i see Dv just pullin this off...Mad dog...came wit some original shit..but i think it was so original it didnt hit hard enough if u kno what i mean..lol..flow was ok..but some of the lines were rushed..or it was just ya dubs werent right..and made it sound rushed...

DV...ya verse was just a lil betta then Mad dogs..flow was ok..not as rushed as u usually do..lyrics was ok just enough to beat Mad dog..

both of yall have shit to work on..which is yall flow could have been betta..MD turn ya vocals down and get ya dubs on point to a more clean and crisp track...

vote...DV

Dv-Beat-Bang Bang=kool.....Sounds like that one song from Kill Bill 7/10..nice samples
Lyrics- iight..I've heard better..but dstill iight 5/10
Flow-Seems kinda off =( 5/10
Presence-ehhhh....5/10 not very forcefull on the mic yo
Voice....good for what I heard 7/10
29/50
Mad- Beat- Aiight beat..but not orignal IMO 5/10
Lyrics- lol some good punches but some played ones ala Tucked and Bomber 6/10
Flow-Got annoying..wasn't that good but STOP having echo on each rhyming word 4/10
Presence- 6/10 Had more presence....more forcefull
Voice- The accent didn't really mix well with the beat..iono nevred me a lil..but usually accent are kinda good but ohwell 4/10

25/50

V/ DV

*listenin*


dv

nancy sinatra sample in this one here.......wow @ u coughin......flow starts off awkward.....wasn't really feelin it 2 much there.....nothin good right there....mmmk maybe you'll pick it back up.....wow.......dissapointing verse from you......a lot of gay lines in here.......soem cool lines but i was expectin this shit 2 be flames.....u rode ther beat ok but i'd work on that ifi werr you.....ummmmmm not really 2 much 2 say.....



mad dog

beat is hard........str8 grimey......feelin this.......like i've said u got a dope uk flow...........i made out just about all of it.......u had some mad nice lines .....tuck is ur t-shirt....and suicide only way 2 blow.......ye these shits were dope.....

vote=mad dog for a stronger verse punches and all that other good shit

Deadly Vision - hahaha at the accent in the intro....flow is nice...you need to raise ya vocal levels...punches were ok..personals need wordplay.... bat was fire still Listen to that young buck beat...

Mad Dog - flow is on point...punches were played..personals weren't good.....delviery is good....please no more Eminem beats its played tooo but


Vote = Mad Dog