Whats up with the world?
 

Im a cocky nigga with arrogance but with a mind that explores wherever it needs to be. From the clubbin to slavery I dont stop u get me. Ill post summin ive been workin on:

Verse 1

People jus lie cheat n deceve
my story so big,
its hard to beleve,
like de rose dat grew from concrete
even harda 2 perceive
all dis deceit?
makes me wanna leave this world and ask for the receit.
its all messed up, wheres the liberty
the worlds gone crazy jus set us free
were representin the whole African community
whats up with tony blair
why did he dare
to go to iraq
and get his army beat up in the dark
why did we get involved
we shudnt have got involved
then it all wouldve all been solved

Verse 2


now tell me what type of people are the craziest
ill tell you it’s the muthafukin athiasts
how can they beleive there aint no GOD, they aint got no proof
and when u discuss with them, they jus dissapear like poof
any ways nearly everyday there is a murderer, killa or a busta
or a thug, jacker or a hustla
this crazy world has got me all messed up in the brain
its levitating like david blaine
driving me insane
all these new artists come out takin about the fame
but they aint got no game
they claim they are a balla
but you aint gonna get no talla
in this crazy world lyin about shit like dat
or ure world will jus shut down in pitch black
all of the fakers im gonna be youre worst nightmare
ill give you a scare
im gonna stand tall and i wont tugg
like MUHHAMMAD or MALCOLM i wont budge
I am the game I never be losin
its Intermental dogg and i aint movin

Ehm...in your second verse, do you have any actual proof God DOES exist? It was decent; basic vocabulary, yet it flowed well. Keep dropping, and you'll elevate as you go, man...

Thanks alot homeboy, the God thing is another debate fo another time u get me

Yeah, man. I'm not atheist or anything, though. Still, we can debate. Check out my piece under this. It's more of a poem, though. :\

Fo sho I will, is it in Open Mic?

this was ok some of it was kinda shaky in some parts, ok flow n vocab wit a subjec tlike this u shoulda used some more imagery ya feel me?

ok drop for such an indepth topic, u should elaborate on it more, keep doin ya thing...1."

yea fo sho i feel you but this aint my best shit, i jus know i can make summin huge anytime now. thanks homie

uppin' cmon yall