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.Fatal Lyricist. 01-06-05 01:03 PM

.Fatal Lyricist. vs TwoTime
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines (5 barz)
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-09-05 at 01:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 01-06-05 01:03 PM

.Fatal Lyricist. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 01:03 PM.

.Fatal Lyricist. 01-06-05 01:28 PM

The mic is a weapon to fatal so fallback......
N Im tight off tha top a da head like small hats................
U a small cat, matta fact u a kitten...............................
Im hittin n spittin, shittin all over ur writtenz...................
Listen, fatalz dat man, who cracks backz like catscans.....
the masked man, pac man, superhero batman.................
im phat man, gunz are crazy wanna see what dey do....
leev more den black n blue, seriously dude, im 'twotimes' betta den u.....
IM hot record deals hear me n dey like i wanna hire you, im fiya dude......
Spittin shyt so personal i think i jus retired you......

haha holla bak

da catscan line afta chiropractors check ya catscan dey crack ya back -1-

System 01-07-05 12:35 PM

TwoTime has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 12:35 PM.

TwoTime 01-10-05 08:18 AM

I'm a long livin L.E.G.E.N.D., and proven more than you can handle/
Watch me take this nucca's lyrics out to the shed and wear them out like Jesus's Sandels//
You better find a God or a way to channel hope/
Because splittin yo dome is easier than slicing cantalope//
Look this nucca is on that FATAL COKE CRACK/
And YEP! "Like Mike" one day he gone want his NOSE BACK//
Nucca you don't realize you fuccin wit tha best not a Joe Schmo amatuer/
My lyrics got this kat shook, he like GAME afraid to face the CAM'ERA//
So stop while your ahead don't spit what you can't prove/
Gangsta ain't shit, if it's as easy to knock you as yo grandma's boobs//

DjPlAiMaKa 01-10-05 08:30 AM

Voted For: .Fatal Lyricist.

This was close, but some of 2times lines threw me off
Opener-2time
Flow-Fatal
Multis-Fatal
Metas-2time
Structure- Fatal
And 2time i didnt get ur last line
Quote:
if it's as easy to knock you as yo grandma's boobs//

.Fatal Lyricist. 01-10-05 08:38 AM

uppin dis mo'fucka na mean -1-

TwoTime 01-11-05 08:09 AM

Up and up I'm uppin this muddafucca... up and up... yea yall get the point...

FataL AkshunZ 01-12-05 06:01 PM

Voted For: .Fatal Lyricist.

Yo Yo i gotta give this to fatal

multis- fatal

punches- even

flow- fatal

creativity- fatal

vocab- neither

personals- even

yo thought that two time your verse got a little choppy at the end. Come harder and give a little more effort on the punches fatals punches were harder hitting and his verse had a little humor in it ..........


elevate

DeHotBwoy 01-13-05 07:26 PM

Voted For: .Fatal Lyricist.

lol okkkk iight man this dude ripped twotime like to bad man he killed u work on ya personal punches and struc and all ya verse Two u need to make ur lines long Fatal good battle u got this 1 tho

Black Haze 01-14-05 08:43 AM

Voted For: .Fatal Lyricist.

woooo, feels good to be back...

great battle fellas this was very close but due to fatals punches, structure and flow he took this one he came out with more energy and he came harder it was a battle well fought out good battle but i got to give this to Fatal

vote=.fatal lyricist.

FaTaLiTy 01-14-05 01:22 PM

Voted For: .Fatal Lyricist.

whoa twotime, my brother ripped you....holy shit dat was a hell of a battle but damn good shit to TwoTime tho damn i seriously thought dat twotime was gonn rip Fatal but i guess not Fatal came harder wit better multis punches strusture and wordplay twotime took erything els na mean but good battle

winner=FL


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