JPoll vs. Afterword
 

yo this is my check-in
and save all that trash talk yungsta( i seen ya priors)

check-it

yo my flow is phuckin butter, my nigg, im on a roll( dinner roll)
you may have beat them other niggs, but dis aint no GAYPoll(JPoll)
but you are a brave soul, so i got my soul caliber
as i roam thru Canada tall as a raptor, elevatin on all u amateur rappers
like "lil rascals", cuz my flow iz da Cever, cuttin you down Eddie Haskell
now stop bendin backwards, even thow ya best flow comes out yur asshole
(fuck dat!!!/ switch-up)
YO ...I INVADED YUR SOIL, FUCKED YUR HOES, ITS ALL GUD--- ILL RAP U LIKE FOIL
CUZ CHANGIN THE OIL IS THE ONLY TIME YO SOFT ASS BEEN IN DA HOOD
IM HOLDIN ISH DOWN LIKE A PAPER WEIGHT, DOUBLE PLATTED IN GOLD
YO STYLE IS STILL FLOATIN AROUN' LIKE A PAPER PLATE, CHANGE YO NAME PLATE 2>
>>jFOLD

Cali's N da house
peace

aight its on, and poppin
im assumin u got busy, b/c i was too( school/ werk/ and bein faded)
but just drop sumtin by today fam aight.
peace

fuck that you straight bit that first line...you bitch i seen that exact line on urbanprowlers...infact it might have been used against me...you bitch

get some of your own lines bitch

wut, dogg u actin like i traced yur old battles and dug up some recycled shyt to use against you. bitch please dont eva insult me like that, i wouldnt even waste my time

just drop yo shyt u excuse havin coward

peace

damn how u gon back out of a battle u posted
i didnt mean 2 offend you
remember no feeding off my verse b/c u have had plenty of time to write sumtin
peace

fuck that i been busy...you a bitch...that' s fucking straight bit...you fucking 0 and 9 bitch trying to talk hard and shit...put you're record back up ...hmm...too sc'red

u seem a lil confused/ let me clear some shyt up

1. how u callin me scurred/ but i already posted up(where u at mr. busy) we all busy
2. my reccord isnt 0-9/ and wut my record got to do wit this current ass-whoopin
3. i talk hard b/c i am /// u talk hard, then ask for votes
sent to me just 10 min. ago by JPoll>>>"hey can i get a vote on this...i'm up 3 to 1"

yur lame and a waste of my time
lets just leave it to rap and let the ppl decide, u pussy
peace

i actually said...hit me up wit an honest vote...but whateva...you a bitch nobody...yeah your record is either 0 and 8 or 0 and 9...if it isn't post it...you bitter...

don't make me find the battle you bit it from bitch

Look at this punk trying to sway votes...fuck loser...and i know that prewritten shit wasn't for me dog...but yeah it's ova

yo yo
listen up onion aftertaste...

Yall remember this bitches record, laughable it's 0 and 9,
Then he hides it, n bites his first line, fuck gettin a backbone, you don't even have a spine,

Yall kids remember Hanson, well he's there otha brotha,
DOO WOOP! he's from LA? yeah louisiana, haha incest wit his hanson brothas,

You wouldn't be a dope gunfighter if you were 'Billy the Kid',
You got no balls avoiding real rhymers, they'd call you 'Billy that hid',

Yur a bitch all that shit was real tired, a year over due, and expired,
Yur talking hard, but kid yur a nobody like Gary Coleman,you'll never be admired,

Ya can't follow my spit, can't keep up wit my shadow,
Yur such a dork, you'd rather play PS2 then be in the Playboy Mansion grado,




cuz, stop trying...ding ding chalk up another loss for afterword...hopefully this was your last word

Basic Battle Nobody Steped It Up.....
J-poll Was Weak As Fuck.......
In Every Bar.....
You Finished Wit The Same Word..../elevate........

Flow-afterword
Personals-aw....j-poll...weak
Structure-j-poll
Punches-afterword....
Vote Goes To Afterword.......

uppin uppin let's go people let's go people.......

such a fucking hate vote just cause i merked your ass yesterday bitch...fuck that you're a nobody bitch....that's weak shit...i finished the line wit da same word to show how easy is was to kill him...you're an idiot bitch...fuck off....that hate bullshit

honsetly battle wasnt that gr8.......not ta mention the stupid ass bitch fight u were having....

aight...goes like this....

Afterwood- had a nice flow, structure was impressive, and kept to basics with the personals and punches which werked well....maybe ya complexity needing up fo real when the verse started to loose a lil emphasis.....good solid drop though....keep it up

7/10

Jpoll-Its aight dawg.....ya had sum good hard multies in there, but really honsetly ya punches wernt really hitting hard, everything else was good flow the lot legit.......try not to use the same wrding in each of the lines....

5.5/10

vote afterwood......dont be bitching gainst me...honest shit!!! dont like it lump it


return the favour!!!.....drop a vote on either of these links

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120747
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120603

he fucking bit his whole first line...fuck you guys are idiots!!!