Speats and Intermental - Hocus Pocus Part II (Hahaha, u know we had to do it again)
 

Haha, me and Speats hit it again. The Part II to the hit version "Hocus Pocus" Yall loved it so much we had to do another one, so here it is, Speats on 1st, Inter on 2nd, Speats on the hook

www.soundclick.com/intermental

"Hocus Pocus Part II"

Inters link:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211627

Speats Link:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211585

Listenin...Weird Beat But Dope....Diffrent good flow lil choppy but speats is nice on this good delivery

Inter: Good Flow,Its Weird as fuck this beat cant get over it lol nice delivery good shit overall an oh did i mention i LOVE HTIS WEIRD AS FUCK BEATS

Lol thankls..........

okay listening.....
intro is kl...sounds like ur both in same room....

speats part: kl...samekind like u did before....this was almoust same kind like first 1
inters part: sounds professional.niceee....like that flow......ur keeping ur style too

whole song was kl.....when #3 s coming? this was kl fo real......

number 3 will be dope too haha weird

I apreciate that dawg.....im tryin to establish a style I think its workin

upppin.................

iitel...

intro is kool....speats.. i like you lol u jus need more emotion in ya tracks,... sound angry maan.. u'll sound alot better... flow is kool lyrics are pretty good... like your verse.. adlibs are ite..

hook could be more uplifting.. its the same as the verse... u should double over ya voclas for that

inter... iite.. emoion is iite could be better tho... flow is kool... lyrics are straight man

yeeh overall its a pretty nmice track jus work on your emotions and delivery...

keep droppin em,

I apreciate that...................

Listening...

Beat is different I like it...

Speats...quality is lackin...flow is decent...flow is choppy sorda...dubs are nice...I like the hook...

Inter...Flow is good...quality is pretty good, good delivery...

Overall pretty good track...keep it up...

not feeln beat, u need emotion, u just talkn no enegery
flow needs alot of work
sounds robotic not natural
lyrics seem lame
chorus is a good idea, but doesnt sound right
up the beat volume
2nd person sounds like a chick lol
Quality is worse than 1st dude
flow also bad, lyrics nothing worth remebering
not a fun track to listen too
Just practice more i guess

3/10

upppin...........

thanks 20 grand really apreciate it.... (sarcarsme)

alright peepin it up now...

that beats decent.....
speats you did decent...ya flow was not as it usually is....like it dont fit this kinda beat...but its straight.....ya lyrics are ehh..not really there but there decent....the hook is good but it needs a little more work its not too shabby at that part.....2nd person ya flow is decent....ya lyrics are ehh soo soo....ya flows what keeps u alive....but yeah this tracks overrall decent....6/10

rtf - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211670

I apreciate it J, I will rtf as soon as I come back home tonite