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Contendership Match: Kontroversey .vs. Kwell
 ^Listen to Diddy...4 votes^
Rules. Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Thursday By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern |
in...this time, i'll let you declare the number of lines so you dont cut short like you did last week...
Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1715494 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1716218 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1716452 |
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I'ma throw punches wit accuracy, hit this fool in the head this hoe only pulls dirt^ .........so from what i saw, he aint the sharpest tool in the shed last week we agreed on 14 lines, but u went 10, what's worse... jus like a stubborn male hairdresser...u a fag that always cuts short n your level of skill is lacking, like the present amount of heat in Siberia damn, it's almost like ya timid the way ya fail to meet the criteria i'ma crush this kid--wit no slip-ups or problems involved put his voicebox in his mom's puss, ........since this loner's already got the habit of talkin ta' walls i came in expectin the worst.....so i invested patience but preparations werent needed, since u fall below expectations lmao again @ u thinkin i PMed cats to vote jus cuz u expected to KO this new face... |
Do Not Sway.
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Im Constantly Gettin' Paid, Syck Lyrics Have your outcome HIV pos-itive....
When it Comes to Spittin' Nice This Herbs Status is Not-Active.... You couldn't spit "Ill" "hip hop" If you had a "vet's Leg"... Laughin at this kids verse, Schema got me battlin a net fag.... me? gay? Nope!, I'm straight, this kid has Curls and Loops Like Afro's.... I'm way uptop, this kid so low He spits punches and Attacks-Toes... Merk You faster then bizzy, You musta been Busy, .............................................Cause this kid lost to Bizzey... You Voters think he's Hot? take a good look, Quote:
....now is he?.. Rhymes Is Herb Killaz, And they ready to Eat Gutz He an Underground artist? yes? but i didnt think he accually "beat nuts".. |
Kontroversey:
hot verse ive seen better stucture from you but one of yer best lines with punches ive seen besides audio...good verse pretty damn full of complcatted shit sry about my spelling again...and your vocab none real to hard...but who cares about vocab..nice flow..and stucture...nuff said.. Kwell: well for a kinda newb kinda not iunno not bad...punches werent realy to good but not bad other den that...stucture pretty good some forced lines witch threw it off a lil...good vocabulary..i have nothing else to say but keep elevating.. VOTE: Kontroversey |
..kontroverzey.. sorted your verse for you.
Pz. |
Wow...
v/ Kontro nice punches,better flow nice structure too & vocab |
ma throw punches wit accuracy, hit this fool in the head
this hoe only pulls dirt^ .........so from what i saw, he aint the sharpest tool in the shed OK OPENER last week we agreed on 14 lines, but u went 10, what's worse... jus like a stubborn male hairdresser...u a fag that always cuts short WEAK...WASNT WORDED PROPERLY, AND DOESNT RHYME WELL n your level of skill is lacking, like the present amount of heat in Siberia damn, it's almost like ya timid the way ya fail to meet the criteria GAY i'ma crush this kid--wit no slip-ups or problems involved put his voicebox in his mom's puss, ........since this loner's already got the habit of talkin ta' walls LOL i came in expectin the worst.....so i invested patience but preparations werent needed, since u fall below expectations OK IP: F127 D910 Im Constantly Gettin' Paid, Syck Lyrics Have your outcome HIV pos-itive.... When it Comes to Spittin' Nice This Herbs Status is Not-Active.... WEAK You couldn't spit "Ill" "hip hop" If you had a "vet's Leg"... Laughin at this kids verse, Schema got me battlin a net fag.... I DIDNT GET THE FIRST PART,N I DIDNT SEE NO PUNCHES IN THE 2ND me? gay? Nope!, I'm straight, this kid has Curls and Loops Like Afro's.... I'm way uptop, this kid so low He spits punches and Attacks-Toes... HMMM NOT WORDED RIGHT Merk You faster then bizzy, You musta been Busy, .............................................Cause this kid lost to Bizzey... ?NOT FEELIN THIS... You Voters think he's Hot? take a good look, Quote: Originally Posted by Kwell merk u...cuz nobody look up to u, aint nobody wanna be Busy DONT GET THIS ....now is he?.. Rhymes Is Herb Killaz, And they ready to Eat Gutz He an Underground artist? yes? but i didnt think he accually "beat nuts".. NOT A GOOD CLOSING... KONTRO ,I DIDNT THINK U CAME HARD MAN....U WERE RELYING ON PERSONALS BUT THEY WERENT STRONG AT IT,LOSING OR WHATEVER TO SOMEOEONE THE TALKIN TO WALLS LINE WAS THE BEST PUNCH IN THIS BATTLE SO I VOTE KWELL HOLLA |
tru...alright let me break it down for u ma
You couldn't spit "Ill" "hip hop" If you had a "vet's He couldnt spit ill (nice rhyme) "hiphop" (hiphop..wordplay hop up and down which u need legs for) "vet"'s (ill lines are usually wrotten by vets) "leg" (hiphop) not clearly broke down but hopefully u'll get it the quote line meaning....last battle katz sed he was good......and shyt...then i quoted a wack line from his last battle ...Now is He? get it... |
.........so from what i saw, he aint the sharpest tool in the shed
last week we agreed on 14 lines, but u went 10, what's worse... jus like a stubborn male hairdresser...u a fag that always cuts short n your level of skill is lacking, like the present amount of heat in Siberia ^^^^ The creativity with ur punches is evident...but it's too forced and doesn't flow well...I want to just run into the punch, not have it forced down my throat (i reserve that for other muscles) hehehehe...j/k ummm...flow is just average...rhyming is average i came in expectin the worst.....so i invested patience but preparations werent needed, since u fall below expectations ^^^ THis doesn't stand out to me 15/20 Im Constantly Gettin' Paid, Syck Lyrics Have your outcome HIV pos-itive.... When it Comes to Spittin' Nice This Herbs Status is Not-Active.... You couldn't spit "Ill" "hip hop" If you had a "vet's Leg"... Laughin at this kids verse, Schema got me battlin a net fag.... ^^Hey, watch that faggot shit...LOL...j/k flow is much better than Kwell's...punches are less forced, though evenly matched in power me? gay? Nope!, I'm straight, this kid has Curls and Loops Like Afro's.... I'm way uptop, this kid so low He spits punches and Attacks-Toes... ^^kinda corn-ish...but flows better than Kwell and dag nabbit for being str8...ur sexy :) hehehehe Vote: Kontro...way better flow.PERIOD. |
Kwell
I'ma throw punches wit accuracy, hit this fool in the head this hoe only pulls dirt^ .........so from what i saw, he aint the sharpest tool in the shed Liked that. Kontro . . . Liked that, lol. I wasn't feeling your verse at all dawg. The first 2 bars didn't rhyme, and then you did some Busy shit which was working. I dont know where you was at with this. v/Kwell. |
vote: Kwell
my man had better flow......... i couldnt see any rhyme scheme in kon's verse...... and a lot of the subject matter was recycled. ( aids punches and so on ) also, i just felt you had a lot of fluff in your verse. Kwell had a couple of decent laughable punches example: I'ma throw punches wit accuracy, hit this fool in the head this hoe only pulls dirt^ .........so from what i saw, he aint the sharpest tool in the shed * funny opener* i'ma crush this kid--wit no slip-ups or problems involved put his voicebox in his mom's puss, ........since this loner's already got the habit of talkin ta' walls * another laughable punch* kon i just couldnt see where you were going wit anything....... nothing rhymed.... even if you tryed to strecth it..... couldnt find the flow... you've dropped better than this...... vote: Kwell stay up the both of yall niccas. "ez" |
that vote dont count cuz i have him on my black list ^^ dont like this kid..that vote dont count
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