Point Made (Prob My Best)
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/dwmusic.htm

KO Records Beat
Only First Verse, Want Feedback Then I'll Continue To Complete With Hook If I Wish

Holla

peeped, all growed up, and e to the ny... -sev

Soundclick is being such a pussy right now... listening on lo-fi... cuz the mp3 is stopping half way through D/L... I wont comment on quality since Im not listenin to the fully mastered peice.... (after goin thru that, MP3 started playin)....

iight listenin while typin... quality is o.k, a couple of pops in it but overall I can hear most every word you say, dubs were a lil off in the second line of first bar, it does sound like the best you've dropped, that I've heard anyway. flow was more comfortable, you were consistent... you ride the beat o.k but your delivery is kinda rigid, try and relax a lil more with how you put it out, lyrics were good in most spots, all in all not a bad verse, still need some work puttin it out there but definately improving... keep droppin.1

so far the beat is tight..
first verse - flow is pretty good.. lyrics are on and off.. some of the lines are pretty good.. some of em are kinda fillerish.. but overall i think you did pretty aight.. enunciation coud use some work, cause of what you were sayin i couldnt understand as well..but i mean, everyone has room to improve.. keep doin the joint.. i can only see it getting better mayne.. u doin ya thang.. i sayd decent drop playa

Listening: beats nice... flows good... dawg what part of UK you from?... rhyming good nicely maintained flow... vocals are good wit the beat... not a long track but you had sum good vocals and an aight flow quite good...

RTF on ma sig :thumbup:

not bad Prem.....am feelin tha beat and ur flow..... quality is decent...where in UK u from?..............check my link in sig to an audio diss, cos i dropped ur name in it :thumbup: and im droppin anudda diss on you n mad dog,ECKO, NOK 2morro or day afta :thumbup: all friendly exchange man...peace

UK STAND UP!!!!!!!!!!!!

dubs are off a lil at times, too loud for dubs, lower then a lil

flow is ight fam
lyrics good

beat was koo

id say 7.5/10
gj fam

*listening*....beat is ok....your flow is pretty nice.....quality isnt all that great...lyrics were pretty good...none of the lines particularly stuck out to me...overall it was just a solid flow...no real ups or downs...a happy medium...flow stayed pretty good throughout the whole track...there was a part or 2 where i wasnt sure about it...but overall it was pretty good....so overall this was a pretty dope track...good flow, decent beat, good lyrics....nice drop...keep droppin

aight...thats one sick beat dude...

ya vocals wuz clear and i could make out errthing you said...flow was aight....you rode the beat well...ur lyrics was on point to homie....i think you should finish da track up...


respect

lol im afraid im gonna have to finish ya then.....lol

manchester

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Prem causin causilties...lol whats up nephew u doing yo shit man am proud to be honest this was one of yo best no doubt..........

thanx, appreciated dawg......................................

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