Vango vs Daclassic
 

heres the rules
10-15 lines
no hate
no dick ridin
spit within 30 minutes of checkin in
5-0 is a knockout

checkin so lets go......

checkin in................................................ ...................

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Da Classic verse
 

Is this a battle?.............................
...........................or is it one of those songs that u rap to
If i was a moderator..................
......................................... I'll disqualify and detach you
it's self explanotory.............
..........................................you gave it to me, no hassle
.... ..no need for me to stress brain waves to try to battle u
Im 2 and 0......................................
.....................i post a b*tchslap wonderin who would show
you would know..................
.......................the third witness of classic's win ethic flow
.........synthetic flow is the real reason you gots to let it go
vango dumb...
............ ...he thought punchlines was typin throwin a blow
After vang's rhyme......................
.........................................take the next time to analyze
hey moderators................
.............................penalyze this faggot for writing rhymes

Uppin For Votes............................................

Vango-
Flow-$$$
Vocab-$$$ Good Battle Vote Goes 2 Daclassic
Structure-$$
Daclassic-
Flow-$$$
Vocab-$$
Structure-$$$

flow-both were pretty good
vocab-vango
wordplays-not much
metaphors-vango
structure-vango
content-dunno
both were not bad. vango edged it out by a little, but daclassic i aint hating. you just need to add wordplays and metaphors. make it easier to read! but ya both were not bad, and keep elevating
overall-vamgo: u sorta didnt make sense at times

v//vamgo

Vango Clearly Won This....No Hate On Yah DaClassic But Vango Came Way Harder In Everything...You Need To Use More Meta's And Some Word Play...All Ur Goin On Is Vocab, I Wasnt Feelin' The Structure Either..

Vote:Vango

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Can Y'all Drop A Vote In My Battles...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117062

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116660

One.

I felt vango won because of his rhyme scheme and multies.
daclassic wasnt that far from winnig this battle.
if he had made it easyer to read and with some punches.

vote=vango

one love........

drop vote in my battle

i was trying something new....i should of stayed with my old structure...lol uppin peace

ok the only thing i didn't like about Daclassics verese is the bunch of periods to fill space. but he had a flow, weak punches.
vango had multis and structure. but i didn't like ether of ur guys vocab.
just elevate
vote~Daclassic

vote goes to vango he took this one by a little bit but not much i didnt like daclassics structre that fucked up his entire verse

Calrity-vango
Vocab-daclassic vango i dont think cared about his vocab, he jus spitted which is gamgsta
Structure- daclassic, i actually liked the periods, its different ppl do da same shit on here i liked it
Punches-def vango

vote-vango jus bcaz of the sleepin wit the bookie line
it was that close
hott battle