brethern vs. whitegold
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

Hope you got talent little fella...

checkin in

here it is...

so u think i'm just a kid and a new fella/
bitch realize i got news for ya/
u ain't got shit and anything on me/
500 plus posts and still a shitty mc/
realize that i'm strong and u are weak/
only battles u ever win are with no shows and geeks/
thinkin ur hot shit and thinkin ur all good/
but to embarrassed to show ure record, don't worry you should/
if i could help you out don't worry i would/
i'd stand at first chance, but i never could/
only problem is u got an uncureable disease/
involves bad rapping, aids and leprisie/
we all got our problems, but u shouldn't touch children/
but u don't mind bein like mike do u brethren/
so after ure done readin this and ur breath runs cold/
realize and tell the kids it's courtisy of whitegold/

Fuck it... I'll win off of flow alone

Failed to impress... I ain't even sparing this guest
Why you wailin? I'mma put some fuckin hair on ya chest
I take ya friends straight from ya palms
While you making amends
take a blade
And staple it right in ya arms
I'm sick... I ain't even throwing punches this time
You sucking at rhymes...you couldn't silence people
If you were fucking a mime...
Flawless victory... the way this kid always thinks of me
Fuck skills... even your name is contradictory
Wish you be hard... but I'm still scarin this honkey
I got em haulin ass like he was carryin donkeys


omg Meters, you were right

breakdown for whitegold:

flow:really basic it was workin i guess though there was a couple of lines really streched that hurt it but you know alright for a newbie 5/10

volcab:need some elevating really basic like it hurts you vese basic 3/10

punches:you addressed him everyline i'll give you that, but the quality of the lines is your big problem all of the lines seem to be as being a fan of old school rap taken right from the early 80's and hense there really played and just not good try to come up with new orginal ideas if you can't come up with anything orginal then atleast word your lines better 4/10

overall:12/30 i see that ability to elevate there just alot of work ahead of you

breakdown for brethern:

flow:really for bragging bout it this wasn't much better then whitegold 5/10

volcab:average array a step above white but that doesn't say much right 5/10

punches:fav line,"You sucking at rhymes...you couldn't silence peopleIf you were fucking a mime..." you didn't address him as much as he did you but the qaulity of your lines was way higher pretty good job 6/10

overall:16/30

vote--brethern gets my vote

this isnt a free posts i posted twice on accident sorry dirtyboy
nioce verseyall lol

white gold your flow was ok but didnt get the jopb done ur structure was better than his
youm had not very good punchlines and too short of lines not good
this was a weak battle
WHITE GOLD *3*
overall keep workin and ull get there
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you wernt much betetr you both need to work on ya punches cuz ya flow was way off
evrything was off in this battlei shouldnt really have to explain even though this battle was weak
it was one sided
bretheren no suprise you win
overall 4* and you get my vote
my vote brethern

lol
Brethren
lol
be fa'real
he fuckin ripped you dude
muahahahahaha
j/k'in
v/bret

haha Brethren aka .44 from shockvalue ova in the oldschool rb...wud up b

brethern ripped this newb.......i seen that you elevated alot since i ripped you awhile back in a crew battle.......when i was trying to help cryptic lyrics elevate.....gud shit man even though you wasnt trying you still had gud flow and your shit was okay
structure a lil fuck but dont really matter for this new

v/brethern

Wow lol Whites verse and almost cried Breth. wins for being Less wack overall white just leave RB.

V/B

.44's new name is Blitzkreiger

I am the one and only Brethren, sir.

Fuck it, people think I actually tried here with that silly verse... but Kryo knows

he aint .44 thats Blitzkreiger or summit like that..

anyway vote Brethern he just killed his opponent with straight ease...

stop acting like you know people from old rb

5 or 6 nothing either way brethern wins