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I.D. 12-06-04 09:10 PM

Sticky Bandit vs Terror2005
 
Battle Rules:

6- 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-06-04 at 09:40 PM

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System 12-06-04 09:11 PM

Terror2005 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 09:11 PM.

System 12-06-04 09:14 PM

Sticky Bandit has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 09:14 PM.

I.D. 12-06-04 09:21 PM


Listen...You Couldn't Be Tight If Your Ass Hole Was A Virgin..
Pebto Bismo Couldn't Help Ya Congestion System Nor A Surgeon
It Would Be A Miracle If You Came With Lyrical Scriptures...
But Your Another Big Dreamer As Walt Disney's Pictures.....
I'm An Advantage Over You Like Regular To Florescent Light Fixtures
I'll Have You Feeling More Steal Then Air Planes With Titanium..
Lyrics Will Hit Ya Dome....Cozzing A Fold In Your Cranium...

8-B@LL 12-06-04 09:22 PM

u couldnt beat me if i was "wackestrapper" and u was "onemanband"//
bitch da most money u will ever have is in ur "rappers" hand//

I throw shots at emcees like targets from long ranges//
You thought you could 'switch' ya style up by listening to 'changes'//

take blades to ya gums, so you can have bloody flosses//
only thing that "sticks" to this "bandit" is continuous losses//

u need to go home and get hooked on phonics cuz ur illiterate//
if u really think ur bout to win dis battle u might as well jus forget it//


Peace Good luck U will Need it bitch!!!!! ~1~

8-B@LL 12-06-04 09:32 PM

uppin votes people honest votes only dis was a good battle in my eyez.....uppin quick

8-B@LL 12-06-04 09:40 PM

uppin dis bitch ppl.......LETS GET SOME DAMN VOTES HONEST ONLY!!!!

Dok Holidae 12-06-04 09:42 PM

This was feedback posted for Sticky Bandit
 
first of all dis was a pretty good one at sticky's side of the battle....Terror came to un organized on what to say and just start out on top and then sank lower and lower....his vocab wasnt even OK you need to practice on dat...your structure was a lil better then sticky's...your flow was aight nothin i havent seen...your punches where weak so you need to elavate on that....Ok now for sticky you came out not to bad like ya opponent...Ya structure was worser then his but ya vocab was way better....ya flow was tearing him up like butchers with meat lol....and da punches you where spittin at him where comin pretty decent....v/ Sticky...both need to elavet sum more especially terror...

8-B@LL 12-06-04 09:46 PM

uppin dis shit bitches hurry up to motha fuckas NOW we need votes....lol

I.D. 12-06-04 09:47 PM

Werrdd............................................ ........................

8-B@LL 12-06-04 10:29 PM

yo uppin dis shit damn lets get some damn votes not no feedback........honest votes only hur up

8-B@LL 12-06-04 11:46 PM

yo uppin votes people come on lets close dis battle......it was good hurry up and post ur votes please.......~1~

gunit101. 12-07-04 01:36 AM

Voted For: Sticky Bandit

This guy gets the vote for rhyming better. Wack punches both of you, no creativity, no wit, no wordplay, no personals, just totally horrible. First guy also couln't rhyme. But second guy did three lines together, which is kinda wack.

Less wack though.

8-B@LL 12-07-04 12:57 PM

uppin votes people lets go....lets get this closed hurry up vote or die.....lol Pz

ReBorn 12-07-04 01:33 PM

Voted For: Sticky Bandit

this battle sucked overall


Terror2005: way to basic, try using multies and ya structure was off


u couldnt beat me if i was "wackestrapper" and u was "onemanband"//
bitch da most money u will ever have is in ur "rappers" hand//
way to basic, punch was able to hit though

I throw shots at emcees like targets from long ranges//
You thought you could 'switch' ya style up by listening to 'changes'//
better then the first, feeling this but could have been better

take blades to ya gums, so you can have bloody flosses//
only thing that "sticks" to this "bandit" is continuous losses//
first line was blah...second line was ok

u need to go home and get hooked on phonics cuz ur illiterate//
if u really think ur bout to win dis battle u might as well jus forget it//
don't ever end a battle with a line that basically say "oh it's over"

could have been alot better, elevate, no hate


StickyBandit: pretty good shit, fell off towards the end though


Listen...You Couldn't Be Tight If Your Ass Hole Was A Virgin..
Pebto Bismo Couldn't Help Ya Congestion System Nor A Surgeon
liked this, was good and hit kinda hard

It Would Be A Miracle If You Came With Lyrical Scriptures...
But Your Another Big Dreamer As Walt Disney's Pictures.....
i can't even tell u how played rhyming scriptures and pictures is, don't ever use the word lyrical unless ya doing audio, wasn't feeling this

I'm An Advantage Over You Like Regular To Florescent Light Fixtures
I'll Have You Feeling More Steal Then Air Planes With Titanium..
Lyrics Will Hit Ya Dome....Cozzing A Fold In Your Cranium...
u should have had something else to rhyme with fixtures cause it made the rhyme scheme uneven, hit but not that hard


overall i think u feel off at the end but it was still enough to over power terror and to terror don't space ya bars and use the slashes at the end of ya lines like that


vote = Sticky Bandit


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