Brydon vs MurDah187
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-06-09 at 06:10 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Win - Expired battle close

Brydon has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-09 06:11 PM.

You fag as if u try bringing bring murda, you waste the voters time,
dude wtf are you thinking when ur shit dont even ryhme?(true story).
Ima kick this shit like an addiction, jus forget ya eazy,
but like a fag u come back over and over jus to try and plz me.
I come hard wid it while u still try to keep up, but fuck it bring it,
i bet you put your self in my shoes while u write jus so u can dream of winning it.
Im jotting this quick while fucked up on vodka and red bull,
i dribble shit while you jus work hard but make it easy looking the fool.
You get the pipe out for that extra bit,u prefer it when high,
but we think its jus better for our eyes if u o.d with it and Die.



Rusty and shocking but after sum time its gettin there slowly....

MurDaH187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-09 10:00 AM.

so its a new month so brydon better change he's tampon,
this bug better ditch his sugar before this ANT get STAMPED ON/
what i see when brydon walks across the street
me trying to Pilot my honda to brake hes knees/
I imagine his throat chamber Splaterd on my Window Whipers
look how i gottem releaseing Bowels, even hes punches are COMPACKED like SHITTY DIPERS/
Brydon sleeping but in battles i got mad pull like a U-HALL
run ova ya Skull an paint my rims Red an white like the Bull's-Hall's/
im a kill'em, so odvious Sin is my Goal
so after i Burn hes Verse im a smoke the ashes in a Bowl/
It'Z MurDaH...

IS THIS WAY OF WRITING BETTER FOR YA??

Voted For: Brydon

ok well im gonna go ahead and vote for brydon generally a weak battle bbuuttt if i had to choose itd be cuz of the one line about this dude bein a faggot that shit was dope

vote-brydon


Unexplained vote removed

Voted For: MurDaH187

Actually it flowed nicer because you shortened lines. You didn't throw to many punches here and i am not big on talkin about the shit you got in a battle it should be directed to him since it is you verse him. And brydon the verse you gave on me i liked this one not so much. I don't liike how you keep puttin your verse down at the end it makes me like well if this aint his best than forget it. A true rapper don't fall off its in his blood no matter how long a break. At least for me. No hate but i vote murdah.

So you cant critic your own work now? come on!!!!!!!!!!

upfront you voted for brydon because of a GAY LINE???

ARE YOU SERIOUS????

now thats a gay vote right there...

thanks away...

And the other voted for you coz i stated i wasnt on my game so its whatever really aint it.

^^^ true true.... 1-1 upp'in for votes...

It was not that you can critic your work 187 jus had nicer verse and yours wasn't bad i thought it was better than decent and you said it wasn't that great so if it aint your best and you know it aint than bring your best next time bra thats all

Its all good homies uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lets get sum votes!

This was feedback posted for Brydon
 

Brydon:
You fag as if u try bringing bring murda, you waste the voters time,
dude wtf are you thinking when ur shit dont even ryhme?(true story).
4/10 - weak opener.
Ima kick this shit like an addiction, jus forget ya eazy,
but like a fag u come back over and over jus to try and plz me.
3/10 - nah.
I come hard wid it while u still try to keep up, but fuck it bring it,
i bet you put your self in my shoes while u write jus so u can dream of winning it.
3/10 - nah.
Im jotting this quick while fucked up on vodka and red bull,
i dribble shit while you jus work hard but make it easy looking the fool.
2.5/10 - does that make any sence?
You get the pipe out for that extra bit,u prefer it when high,
but we think its jus better for our eyes if u o.d with it and Die.

oops sorry guys .. wasted my vote ... is was a weak battle anyways ... think i woulda gave it to murdah tho