17. Original (1-0) vs 18. Defcon_5 (1-0)
 

Ten Lines Will Do.

Im not on RM stop tryna get fake personals
http://www.rapverse.com/community/s...d=1#post2805240
http://www.rapverse.com/community/s...d=1#post2805242
http://www.rapverse.com/community/s...d=1#post2805248
http://www.rapverse.com/community/s...d=1#post2805256

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\He Didnt So Gimme The Win Kepm

didn't i already beat u on RM? yeah 10 i guess

hahaha shut that shit up..i smashed u while i was rusty

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=946693

ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do
don't remember ur RM stay..trust u were never missed
cause i smashed u once..and we haven't seen u ever since
give it up fucka..charades over..how'd u manage to fake all these..
..people..when u have more ERA's than a Fantasy Baseball league
stupidity wins..has it sunken in that i usually offend?
and if history repeats..then ya record is hitting puberty..again
if u really think u'll win..and their saving a place too
then you're dumber than Kempomrk is for making me face you

easy

Dudes good with research went to google make his punch be hittin
I mean he traveled back to 2002
and brought back some punches with him

only decent line i thought ...the rest were played coming from original.

vs.

ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do

only decent line coming from D's verse as well imo.

both of your punches were average at best and didn't appeal for shit. both punches were along the same standards as well. Original had some massively unoriginal shit. arrest punches and wide reciever shit, not only played but horribly worded. I think D came the hardest and most original, he just had failing concepts. so ..

v. Defcon_5

ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do
worded bad
don't remember ur RM stay..trust u were never missed
cause i smashed u once..and we haven't seen u ever since
no
give it up fucka..charades over..how'd u manage to fake all these..
..people..when u have more ERA's than a Fantasy Baseball league
meh
stupidity wins..has it sunken in that i usually offend?
and if history repeats..then ya record is hitting puberty..again
meh
if u really think u'll win..and their saving a place too
then you're dumber than Kempomrk is for making me face you
nope

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Dudes good with research went to google make his punch be hittin
I mean he traveled back to 2002
and brought back some punches with him
o.k.
I dont need fake personals to win cause dude that's bad
cause im just tired of this jew getting clowned on...
...Like i was Krusty's dad
meh
...Especially when my opponent is dumb as shit
I told him there was a fine line between dopeness
...and he tried to hit on it
nice, but coulda been better
And dude you talk to much altough you drop average at best
So dawg i''l handcuff your mouth
So ill handcuff your tongue...to give your mouth arrest
play'd
Now dont lie you dont play sports...your just a wiener
And playing with your boyfriend...
is the only time your a wide reciever
nice

v/original

1-1.........Vote Up......

Up over no-shows.

Dudes good with research went to google make his punch be hittin
I mean he traveled back to 2002
and brought back some punches with him


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ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do


EHhh battle here , original misworded a couple bars like the mouth arrest
and only had that bar that stood out
i battled def before so i know he half assed
so it comes down to comparing those two bars
and defcons shit connected better though they both can do better
v/ defcon

vote up on the contendership battle

ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do

vs.

...Especially when my opponent is dumb as shit
I told him there was a fine line between dopeness
...and he tried to hit on it

Defcon, Original is the kinda name more than 1 person could have and I'm pretty sure this Original isn't the one from before. Given that, it hurt ya verse that ya focused on it so much. Opener was cool though, ERA line was almost quotable, seems like ya didn't care to try to be too fresh in this but you were fairly consistent.

Original, wording was just much far inferior to Defcon's. The fine line thing, I've seen that concept used, but you flipped it differently and I thought it was pretty cool. Really inconsistent verse tho, first two concepts were kinda played, mouth arrest was too, and the closer was...ewww, lol. You can do better than this, I've seen it.

Vote - Defcon

Dudes good with research went to google make his punch be hittin
I mean he traveled back to 2002
and brought back some punches with him

vs

ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do


Those are the only quotables here...and id say Defcon is more of a hard hitting punch with more meaning and strength....overall it wasnt to close Defcon was easily noticable much more then his opponent...v/defcon

Nice battle here. Defcon came nice with the personals. The first two punches hit nice and that puberty line followed it up well. Original wasn't bad either. The opener was funny and the krusty line was nice. I didnt really feel anything else tho. I'm going with Defcon for more bringing more personals and having more quotables.


vote - defcon 5

V/ Defcon 5

this battle was ok....kinda of a boring read for both but....ok.

Def..

ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do
don't remember ur RM stay..trust u were never missed
cause i smashed u once..and we haven't seen u ever since

^even tho these aren't "witty" "Clever" they are personal...tho not hard, but personal.

Original...

Dudes good with research went to google make his punch be hittin
I mean he traveled back to 2002
and brought back some punches with him

^If u stayed on that path there...NO CHANCE FOR DEF!!! But.....the Krusty line was coo...but Im like Def ain't no damn JEW! "hince the fake personals" but his wasn't fake against you?? So why claim that??

peice

ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do
don't remember ur RM stay..trust u were never missed
cause i smashed u once..and we haven't seen u ever since

vs

Dudes good with research went to google make his punch be hittin
I mean he traveled back to 2002
and brought back some punches with him



nothing from either verse stood out. ok battle. defcon seemed not to care/try much, but i guess he didnt need to

vote - defcon