Empire vs KroNuz
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 09:37 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

KroNuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 09:23 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 09:30 PM.

Ill Kill Ya Raps,Insist My Wrath, Ya Ass Isnt Worth It
My Siggs Are Wack, But They Fit Ya Skills Perfect!

You Takeing An L, Lucky Im Even Letting You Live,
And Your Speach Contradicts Skill, Cuz No Vets In Ya Sigg!

Wit Ease Beat This Crude Bitch In 2 Hits, This Dudes Shit,
And His Lack Of Skill Easy To See Like How He Crewless!

Finisher

Fuck Empire, I Disrespect Phonys'
No One Made You A Sigg cuz.....
Makers Do Vets Only!

This A Basic Drill, I Rape N Kill,
No Crew Wants You Cuz......
Acceptance Is BASED ON SKILL!

K ids R eally O verrated N iggas U sually Z ero
As in votes on his battles to make it a little bit clearer
Claim he got flow and he winning with PUNCHLINES
so why he got 7 wins and called me out in FRONTLINESlink
Im better then every GRAM,OUNCE and POUND of you
And ill continue to beat you down till ya CREW COUNCIL YOU(1
Bow face DOWN to the ground and tell me you sorry
Hey you gave WHAT YOU COULD
But you more rejected THEN BLACK BARBIs
in WHITE NEIGHBORHOOD



(1-his crew is the Council
(2-the first line is a diss play on his name

Voted For: KroNuz

kronuz cuz he had better punches and the closing was tight empire you had bad structure and hardly any punches so kronuz gets ma vote.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

personals- both
multis-tie
punches- kronuz
structure- kronuz
opening- tie
closeing- kronuz

over all kronuz wins

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This was feedback posted for Empire
 

empire, you had an avergae verse, but I liked your council line, it was the best in your verse.
but the rest just sucked.
your flow was horrible, and I think Kronuz go this, because he was more consisent.
his flow was MUCH better.
it was pretty even, but I think Kronuz edged it out.

This was feedback posted for KroNuz
 

decent verse overall

opener was probably ya best lines to me the closer was pretty decent to but the rest of ya verse i didnt feal to much really an didnt feal how u kept talkin about the same disses about crews an vets just reworded punchs should have just used a different topic an would have made the verse better to me not that bad of a drop though just change up topics instead of playin off the same shit the whole verse

and empire your verse tried to be straight to the point didnt realy feal much of the punchs though kinda lacked alot in creativite an strong punchs tried rewording your punchs to help em hit alot harder cause most of ya lines were soft to me

no hate

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This was feedback posted for Empire
 

Just check'n this, good verse's.

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